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The day I caught my butterfly
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The day I caught my butterfly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The day I caught the butterfly I do not know on whose behest, It yours or mine or ours the quest? To feed upon this nectars seem And feel the valid of this dream. I swear I do not know the true, A fantasy, or really you? Did I capture the butterfly, Or was the butterfly just I? Alas, I've caught this dream this cast. But on the very edge of last. And once again I'll spin the thread, Cocoon back to the living dead. To dream once more with inner eye, To dream I caught my butterfly. To spawn once more a cast come true. To dawn once more the real of you. God grant the muse come true again, And I care not how, where, or when. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I see the butterfly as it flutters by... I think for sure it's you, dear Sy...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Elusive is the butterfly you think you've caught flying by with net of gossamar and words that care but you cannot capture free and fair Another lovely poem, Sy [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 03-11-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You set the butterfly to wing with just the touch of your heart sing. Graced the pages of the book captured illusions with just one look. Through minds eye all a'flutter on wings of softest yellowed butter. Beauty of elusive wing will return to your heart's sing. When upon the dream of cast she will return to you at last. Folding in the threads of dream wrapping cocoon of ever seem. *You, kind sir, are inspiration personified. You cause me to float through flowers scent. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very well presented, Mr. Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, oh Nan the artisan, Reminds me of a sweet yulan. Pretty witty and always true. I think that I"m in love with you. *L* Sy Martie, The butterfly came to me, And spread her wings for me to see. I touched her for an instants time. And that's what set the bells to chime. *L* Sy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
The butterfly that you have sought I think most surely you have caught With words of magical delight How could this butterfly now take flight?! So very lovely, my friend ..... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, Sy!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Pepper, I loved your words and what you said I'll think of them when I'm in bed. Love Sy Denise, Thank you for the lovely. *L* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear sy, oh sy To catch a butterfly Spread her wings and up she'll fly To try to reach the pale blue sky You captured her here upon the page And set the scene upon the stage Your dream of that butterfly so real captured my heart, which you did steal Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, the beauty of the butterfly- Captured with your silver ink, Wings sprayed in blues and pinks, Fluttering with delicate grace, Dancing through this passionate place. Beautiful read! *Krista Knutson* I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The true quetion do you quest for the butterfly or for the beautiful mystery within ...the answer remains within you beautiful poet. I am amazed by your talent and blessed to be a part of your audience. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautiful Sy, flawless in its rhythm and rhyme |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, I'll keep your heart safe and well Aboard my ship the caravel. *L* Alwye, Glad you enjoyed the read. Butterfly, The beautiful mystery within. Hoot, Thank you. *L* |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful words and imagery as always Sy! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Say there, Seymour~ What .... Balladeer and I don't count?  LOL ! ~*Us*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, your comment was so good that I answered it in my mind and never put it in writing. Forgive me, *L* Sy Balladeer, Again I answered you in thought and never put it down. Forgive me my friend. Nate, Thank you for your thoughtful comment. |
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