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Fir Tree (a Haiku)

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INclan
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Fir tree bending low
Softly, warm lips touching mine
Foresight, The Sixth Sense



Please refer to this interesting challenge posted by Post deVine in poetry
               challenge!

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-11-2000).]
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Inclan~
Challenge or not .... this is
a lovely haiku.
You sure met PoetDV's challenge though.
~*Marge*~




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I love it!  

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I can smell the fir, wet from a thunderstorm, perhaps?  Lovely...

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Thank you all for your kind words. Joannak, I see this was your first post. Welcome to Passions.

INclan
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this is so lovely!!you love haiku too...can't wait to read more of yours!!
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Foresight?  The sixth sense?  And lips touching... yes! Much gratitude for this, INclan.
 
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