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Her Eyes

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Sven
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0 posted 03-11-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Her eyes speak to me with love
Two beautiful pools of blue
Showing me an angel sent from above
With skin of fairest hue

I can see the pain they hide
And feel the tears that have been shed
But through the pain I can see the beauty reside
A beauty dying, that needs to be fed

Spring forth beautiful one
From behind the mask that you've hidden
Show us your eyes of blue and hair like the sun
And of your pain be ridden

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Isis
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1 posted 03-11-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Sven, glad you rehashed this one  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Marina
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2 posted 03-11-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, well,well, well...there is another side to you! Who know....or maybe It's because your always showing me your bad side!

I loved this....very tender and sweet.

Marina
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3 posted 03-11-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

The windows of to our soul is through our eyes put into a poem with care.  One word: lovely.  And all those other synonyms of the word 'beautiful' too.     Nice poem.  

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


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