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From Hands To Soul

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christies heart
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0 posted 03-11-2000 05:54 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart

Look at these hands
holding bundles of shame.
Forgive me for caring
despite my true name.

Look at these fingers
they tremble with fear.
Please go away
you're some how too near.

Look at these eyes;
they speak now for me.
If I were much smarter
I'd set this bird free.

Look at my soul,
for now you may know
that my hope grows restless
the second you go.

Look once again.
Try not to pretend,
that from my hands to my soul
I've met a lost friend.  


 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-11-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

look at this poem...
see how it moves me,
look at its gifted poet...
her words can set her free...

perfection from your pen...once again  
take care, jm


 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
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2 posted 03-11-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

christy,

this was just plain beautiful! as always your work is wonderful and inspiring. keep it up.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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3 posted 03-11-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Christie~
A lovely look at your emotions.
Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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christies heart
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4 posted 03-12-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

JM, Aimster and Marge,Thank you for such kind words.



 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


Marina
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5 posted 03-12-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Very thought provoking and beautifully written.

Marina
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 03-13-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Thought this was very well written.  What else can I say?  Back to the top you go.
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