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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Cataclysmic < !signature-->~*Marge Tindal*~ You came rolling in like thunder from out across the bay Struck me with the forces commanding me, Stay! Bolts of you lit up my life again and again and again Shelter from the storm I seek before the thunder begins Loudly resounding thunderously clapping Slammed me Damn me for feeling this way Slashing, smashing my heart upon the shore Billowing, blowing no more am I knowing where to hide from the storm Moving off to the west the storm is receding now I am left alone, bereft the thunder rolls Tossed and turned nowhere to land storm of passion for just one man the thunder rolls I watch the thunderheads building I cower in the memories of how you shook my world You came rolling in like thunder from out across the bay rocked me to the core then moved away the thunder rolls ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-11-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You better tie me down, cause I'm blown away by your words. Very powerful storm, Marge, and well done poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Good morning, dear. I'm glad you liked. Batten down the hatches, huh? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done, I enjoyed muchly. Care to trade our snow for your storm? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Oh, nooooooo ! The Florida sunshine is my forte. Thanks, Mike ... glad to see your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
I like the way you write Marge.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ms. Lorelei~ I thank you, for that for it flows from my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow, Marge! This is really powerful! I got caught up in the words and the tempo of my heart raced with the rising tempo of your lines and it really was actually a storm-like experience. Whew! You need to pass out tranquilizers with poems like this one!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I agree with balladeer, you shook up my boat pretty good. *L* Wonderful poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ I appreciate your comments. To take the reader through the storm is the quest of this poet. Sharing an experience with you is so nice.  Seymour~ Now to know that I rocked your boat too, makes me one happy little sailor. Thank you. Love you BOTH .. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is very powerful, Marge! I wish you only storm free skies! Denise |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW, this one had me caught up in the storm, you could fee the power in it...what a great poem...as are all of yours.... |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW, this one had me caught up in the storm, you could fee the power in it...no delicate sound of thunder here..what a great poem...as are all of yours.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks for the wish. Guess we all need an ocassional 'storm' to clean out the debris. BSC~ I'm glad you rode out the 'storm'. Pleased you enjoyed. ~*Marge* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
My heart rolls as the thunder in this and my tears become the rain. My minds deep thoughts providing the crashing and because it lives inside of me....it grows out of control. My ears hear only the sounds of this storm deaf from the wind. I am afraid to let anyone in because I fear that if they can't stop the storm either....I will be forever lost. I guess you can tell that I am living this.....and so strange that you could write it.....as I try to hide it |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge, this is very powerful and very beautiful. Excellent as always. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Yes, I know you are living in a tempest-tossed arena right now ... you can't hide it, my friend. I'm not sure what compelled me to write this one ... I only know it came 'rolling in like thunder'. It's hard to realize that the storm eventually moves out and leaves the serenity of starlit nights and smile-filled days ... but it does, I promise you. Until that time comes for you, David ... I send you an umbrella of friendship to shelter you from the ravages of the storm. Love and hugs, my friend. ~*Marge*~ DarkAngel~ Thank you for the excellent. I am so pleased that you found it so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge one stormy post I like see ya Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dear Marge, This is an excellent poem! Strongly felt. From Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thank you. I'm pleased. PoeMinister~ Pleases me that it pleases you. ~*Marge* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one really strikes home with me and you will see why in a second. This reminds me of a poem I wrote two years ago, not long before I left my abusive husband. I'm posting that poem here for you. Unsettled There is no calm before the storm. long before the silence is broken; the clouds set in. I find myself trembling in the darkness, waiting for the first outburst. Why must it always be this way? I can shut my eyes to the lightning; but the thunder still roars; and my tears fall like rain. Long after the storm has passed... The effects remain. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Your words struck a chord in the heart of one who, although I never suffered abuse, has such compassion for those who have. Bless you that you were able to free yourself from it's clutches. Does the thunder ever roll away? I hope it has for you. Love to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge...that's a good question you ask. No, I don't think it ever rolls totally away, but rather grows more distant in time. I think if one listens close enough, they can still hear its sound years down the road. I don't necessarly consider that a bad thing, it serves as a reminder of where I've been and where I never wish to go again. Although I would never wish my life on another, I do not regret it for it has made me who I am and I truly like the person I've become through everything. Hugs Ruth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Can't disagree with your thinking there. Know what? I like who you are too, as do many others in your life. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Hon...I've grown rather fond of you too |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thanks gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bang New Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 6 |
Your words evoked a tumultuous feeling...a rumble of something long forgotten...absolutely wonderful! Bang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bang~ I am glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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