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kaile
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0 posted 2000-03-11 05:19 AM


The officer barked that everyone was to fall in.
All rushed over-eager to please.
With one looking proud and smug,
his helmet an assortment of
pink,red,yellow,orange flowers

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1 posted 2000-03-11 05:55 AM


This is great : :

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer



Justbleu
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2 posted 2000-05-20 02:56 AM


Kaile I liked this a lot!!  I never thought of it that way!!  It's cool!!  Thank You soooo much for responding!!  I haven't been at Passions for awhile now!!  Sorry it took soooooo long for me to realize someone else had responded and for me to see it!!

Keep Writing and Welcome to Passions!!!!!  

Bridgette  



 

Mon Cherie
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3 posted 2001-12-05 12:52 PM


Haha... Is that some lesson about camouflage? This reminds me of the show Army Daze!!   Really funny!

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Florence

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