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kaile
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Reflections on a cloudy day


Candy floss,soft wool
fluffy white clouds in blue sky
scented angels fly
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I don't know how this one slipped by everyone. It is an excellent haiku. Very nice writing, kaile
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I agree, i really love Haiku and this one is great. It seems like people are only posting haiku here, but I've been trying to get some interest going in the Pub. Please stop by.

~Gene
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Well Done!  Keep up the good work.

INclan
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Another beauty, Kaile! Well done!

Denise
 
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