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~You gate crashed my brain and seeped out through my pen~

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tracie66
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You drift in and out at times not desired
As you gate crash my brain when I'm feeling so tired

You make up the words and they spin in and out
Please not at this moment, I'm wanting to shout

I'm trying to sleep, but you always interrupt
The sleep pattern of my brain you try to corrupt

So I jump out of bed and write down whats in my head

Cause you've gate crashed my brain and seeped out through my pen
And my sleepless night is about to begin
                
                



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 03-11-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

creative. interesting how you refer to it as 'gate-crashing'. now let me take a wild guess, that would mean your new ideas are, perhaps, crashing through your gate of slumber and seeping out of your pen? correct me if im wrong. i do that too, and lose plenty of sleep at that! at first i was thinking it was some guy calling you late at night. i dunno, either way u got me thinking
CMGrimm
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2 posted 03-11-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Wonderful Tracie...glad Im not the only one...

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
doreen peri
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3 posted 03-11-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Well said, tracie! I experience this all the time. Darn Muse keeps me going and I write some classics in my head tossing and turning, not being able to sleep. Then, when I go to write it down.... poof! Gone, like vapor!

Your poem seems to say that you are able to capture the Muse and write it down. Ah... to be so lucky!

Enjoyed this poem, tracie. I have one on the same subject. I think I'll repost it.

dp
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4 posted 03-11-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
I enjoyed this.
Just welcome them in
and let the muse begin.

With great amusing
I welcome the intrusion
of thoughts cascading
into the slumber
of my night.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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5 posted 03-11-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A great response by all and I thank everyone for their replies  

Eagle scorpion you were right the first time
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CM thanks  
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Doreen I don't always get it down in time but when I do I'm greatful  
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Marge my wonderful friend thankyou for reading and enjoying as you know I always appreciate your replies    


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
 
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