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*Forgive Me*
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*Forgive Me* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Soft lunar apparitions Flutter on the midnight fabric Of iced emotion A drifter's voice lingers Upon the haze of grey Whispers not quite heard And tears silently fallen Gently fade away. Forgive me, my love When the fiery tides sweep And shadow demons engulf I yearn with my shattered soul To return to your embrace For your smile melts The horizon of my frozen dreams And offers solace from this place. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Another excellent poem Krista, your ability is astounding. Bravo yet again  Now where's Jeffy when ya need him...? Abrahm Simons Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krista, I don't know how you do it... how do you find so much emotion to put into your poetry? It is so wonderful. Keep up your wonderful work, and I look forward to seeing a lot more. Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart. Cassie |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
As a forever fan of your work, Alwye, this is another shining example of your work and talent. Lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ This is a fine work of emotion. 'Soft lunar apparitions Flutter on the midnight fabric Of iced emotion' Simply lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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