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*Forgive Me*

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Soft lunar apparitions
Flutter on the midnight fabric
Of iced emotion
A drifter's voice lingers
Upon the haze of grey
Whispers not quite heard
And tears silently fallen
Gently fade away.

Forgive me, my love
When the fiery tides sweep
And shadow demons engulf
I yearn with my shattered soul
To return to your embrace
For your smile melts
The horizon of my frozen dreams
And offers solace from this place.


 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 03-11-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Another excellent poem Krista, your ability is astounding.  Bravo yet again  

Now where's Jeffy when ya need him...?


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Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.


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2 posted 03-11-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Krista,

I don't know how you do it... how do you find so much emotion to put into your poetry?  It is so wonderful.  Keep up your wonderful work, and I look forward to seeing a lot more.  

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
Cassie

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As a forever fan of your work, Alwye, this is another shining example of your work and talent.  Lovely poem.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


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4 posted 03-11-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
This is a fine work of emotion.

'Soft lunar apparitions
Flutter on the midnight fabric
Of iced emotion'

Simply lovely.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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