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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where once (repost) Where once her presence filled the air, Now just sets an empty chair. Where once there rang the dinner sound, Now the silence is profound. Where once a scent did fill the room, Now the scent, a bloom less bloom. Where once her vibrants moved the light, Now lies coldness and the night. Where once played footsteps on the floor, Quiet now the portal door. Where once her love in full rapport, Silent now forever more. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and sad... and very well done! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, Sy. Where once there was a poet, there still is..and he is YOU.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you for the well done. *L* Poet deVine, I love you too. Sy |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
This is so sad, but yet so beautiful. Very well written. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You touched my heart with a memory that caused a tear to fall. I thank you for reminding me of someone who is worth my tears. Bless you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, you have flooded me with memory's tear, for the loss of someone very dear and the drowning cry that I hear is only angel dust coming near. A lovely poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angel, thank you for the beautiful comment. Marge, you are to me a breath of spring, The air about a butterflies wing. The color and sound of tenderness. The softness and the dreaminess. Like Nan, I love you too. Martie, May the angel dust Bring peace adjust. *L* Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully melancholy, Sy. Just wonderful. Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very nice poem  ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the wonderful comment. *L* Starr, Thank you for the nice. |
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