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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 03-10-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Where once   (repost)

Where once her presence filled the air,
Now just sets an empty chair.
Where once there rang the dinner sound,
Now the silence is profound.

Where once a scent did fill the room,
Now the scent, a bloom less bloom.
Where once her vibrants moved the light,
Now lies coldness and the night.

Where once played footsteps on the floor,
Quiet now the portal door.
Where once her love in full rapport,
Silent now forever more.

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1 posted 03-10-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful and sad... and very well done!
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Lovely, Sy. Where once there was a poet, there still is..and he is YOU....
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Suthern,
Thank you for the well done. *L*

Poet deVine, I love you too. Sy
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4 posted 03-11-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

This is so sad, but yet so beautiful. Very well written.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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Seymour~
You touched my heart with a memory
that caused a tear to fall.
I thank you for reminding me
of someone who is worth my tears.
Bless you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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Sy, you have flooded me with memory's tear,
for the loss of someone very dear
and the drowning cry that I hear
is only angel dust coming near.

A lovely poem!
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7 posted 03-11-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Angel, thank you for the beautiful comment.

Marge, you are to me a breath of spring,
       The air about a butterflies wing.
       The color and sound of tenderness.
       The softness and the dreaminess.
Like Nan, I love you too.

Martie, May the angel dust
        Bring peace adjust.
*L* Sy
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Beautifully melancholy, Sy. Just wonderful.

Denise
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very nice poem  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


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Denise, Thank you for the wonderful comment. *L*

Starr, Thank you for the nice.
 
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