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Foolish Soul
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Foolish Soul Feeling old tattered and torn exhausted, bewildered and worn… Out. Dilapidated from the passage of time Journey of a soul searching foolishly Lost Exploited… abandoned and deceived A river of sorrowful tears discards forever. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Angel girl, you've been writing some sad stuff! But very well written sad stuff. HUGS to ya girl! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my....wonderful words..such a few of them but they pack a powerful meaning!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Soul sis - I don't know, with just a few words you show all of your feeling...wish I was there to give you a hug - and I will be soon dear.  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Beautiful yet very very sad. I wish I could take away that pain for you - I gladly would if that were possible. I am here for you whenever you need me - always. Moonshine. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i had my computer opened on this poem when i went to eat something, then i was disconnected from being idle, and i didnt have a chance to write anything so i signed on again to reply... now i forgot what i wanted to say.. DOH! oh well, i liked it anyway. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey Girl....this is some sad stuff here  Big hugs |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, Wow this is so powerful and I love it.. You have just sumed up alot of very big feelings I have had for a long time. Cerenity |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Glad I read this one. Very well done. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Hauntingly sad. Beautifully formatted. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautifully written, Dark Angel. You always express yourself so wonderfully with such few words. Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is the most fantastic thing I've read today, you have written something very special here. HUGS Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, Thanks so much honey. --------------- Sharon thanks for your lovely reply. --------------- Sweet Butterfly, thank you so much, wish you were here to give me a hug too, can't wait for you to get here . --------------- Moonshine, I know you would and you have tried and that means alot to me. --------------- EagleS, so glad you liked it. thank you.--------------- Ruth, thanks for the hugs honey. *hugs back* --------------- Cerenity, thanks so much for your lovely reply. --------------- Thanks Mike --------------- Thannk you Marge for you always lovely replies. --------------- Thank you Denise for your lovely comment . --------------- tracie, wow, thank you, so glad you enjoyed it. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
5 weeks!  |
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