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Foolish Soul

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-10-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Foolish Soul


Feeling old
tattered and torn
exhausted, bewildered
and worn…

Out.

Dilapidated
from the passage
of time

Journey of
a soul searching
foolishly

Lost

Exploited…
abandoned and
deceived

A river
of
sorrowful tears
discards

forever.




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 03-10-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Angel girl, you've been writing some sad stuff! But very well written sad stuff.  HUGS to ya girl!
Poet deVine
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2 posted 03-10-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh, my....wonderful words..such a few of them but they pack a powerful meaning!  
Severn
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3 posted 03-10-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Soul sis - I don't know, with just a few words you show all of your feeling...wish I was there to give you a hug - and I will be soon dear.

K



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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4 posted 03-11-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Beautiful yet very very sad. I wish I could take away that pain for you - I gladly would if that were possible. I am here for you whenever you need me - always.

Moonshine.
EagleScorpion
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5 posted 03-11-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

i had my computer opened on this poem when i went to eat something, then i was disconnected from being idle, and i didnt have a chance to write anything so i signed on again to reply... now i forgot what i wanted to say.. DOH! oh well, i liked it anyway.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 03-11-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey Girl....this is some sad stuff here  
Big hugs
Cerenity
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7 posted 03-11-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Dark Angel,

Wow this is so powerful and I love it..
You have just sumed up alot of very big feelings I have had for a long time.

Cerenity
Mike
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8 posted 03-11-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Glad I read this one.  Very well done.
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9 posted 03-11-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
Hauntingly sad.
Beautifully formatted.
~*Marge*~



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Denise
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10 posted 03-11-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautifully written, Dark Angel. You always express yourself so wonderfully with such few words.

Denise
tracie66
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This is the most fantastic thing I've read today, you have written something very special here.  HUGS  

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
Dark Angel
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12 posted 03-12-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel, Thanks so much honey.  
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Sharon thanks for your lovely reply.  
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Sweet Butterfly, thank you so much, wish you were here to give me a hug too, can't wait for you to get here .  
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Moonshine, I know you would and you have tried and that means alot to me.  
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EagleS, so glad you liked it.   thank you.
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Ruth, thanks for the hugs honey. *hugs back*
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Cerenity, thanks so much for your lovely reply.  
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Thanks Mike  
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Thannk you Marge for you always lovely replies.  
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Thank you Denise  for your lovely comment .  
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tracie, wow, thank you, so glad you enjoyed it.  


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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13 posted 03-12-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

5 weeks!

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