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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-10 08:57 PM


The Glass Door Swung Open Wide

The glass door swung open wide
an open novel on the other side,
years of waiting to be just read
left dangling like a loose thread.

An open novel on the other side
never left a secret place to hide,
wanting only a chance to shine
every mountain a steep decline.

Years of waiting to be just read
left constant loneliness instead,
long days of restless solitude
developed sadness in attitude.

Left dangling like a loose thread
a personality dissolved in dread
waiting for the time in life to ride
the glass door swung open wide.

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2000-03-10 09:32 PM


Dreamer, this is excellent. You adhered to the form flawlessly...and the words are excellent. Very impressive.
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-03-10 09:48 PM


Wow Gloria, I really like what you did with this one. Nice format you choose to display your words in  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-10 09:57 PM


This is excellent, Gloria!! Well done!  

Denise

Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 2000-03-10 10:36 PM


Thank You all very much, I had fun putting this one together.
doreen peri
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5 posted 2000-03-10 10:59 PM


Well done, Gloria! I'm telling you... I have really seen you grow so much in your writing just within the past couple of months! This is a keeper! Nice work!
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 2000-03-10 11:57 PM


Doreen: Thank You very much for your kind compliments.
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