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Reverie

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Diana B
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floating in the bird cage
lonely flower
long of stem faded colors
lost of love silicon dried
lived forever too soon died
fragrance gone
drained life's essences
on the bookshelf
adonis statued victim
broken glued
torn between two lovers.
predators willing prey
paradise lost regained
played in games
eternity shatters past is gone
future clouded present
frees them both for now.
adonis breathes, flower's fragrant
love has blossomed
miracle born
his compassion.

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Wow what images I am left with while reading your poem......Thank you

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Diana~
Enjoyed this very much.
Welcome to Passion's.

~*Marge*~
  


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bboog
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nice imagery.
bboog
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4 posted 03-10-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

wow...cryptic, like (well, a reverie, i guess)  images like flash cards...Nice...
Looking forward to more.
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Exellent!  I agree, the images popped up almost like flashcards.  This is very unique and very well done.  Welcome to passions!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

 
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