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Reverie |
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Diana B Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 97 |
floating in the bird cage lonely flower long of stem faded colors lost of love silicon dried lived forever too soon died fragrance gone drained life's essences on the bookshelf adonis statued victim broken glued torn between two lovers. predators willing prey paradise lost regained played in games eternity shatters past is gone future clouded present frees them both for now. adonis breathes, flower's fragrant love has blossomed miracle born his compassion. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Wow what images I am left with while reading your poem......Thank you There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Diana~ Enjoyed this very much. Welcome to Passion's.  ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-10-2000).] |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
nice imagery. bboog |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...cryptic, like (well, a reverie, i guess) images like flash cards...Nice... Looking forward to more. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent! I agree, the images popped up almost like flashcards. This is very unique and very well done. Welcome to passions! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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