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I Came Home Tonight

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angel girl
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0 posted 03-10-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

I Came Home Tonight

I came home.
You were mad.
We were alone.
This made you glad.

You came at me.
I tried to duck.
I was too late.
My face was struck.

Falling down,
You kicked my head.
On the ground,
My face bled.

Pain shot through me
With every blow.
I wanted to flee
And from this Earth go.

My wish was granted.
I died that night.
Heaven I was granted.
I came Home tonight.
© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
just_another_fe
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wow i dont know what to say this is a great poem but i hope you just made this up.best wishes to you
JamesMichael
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This is a very well written poem it has described the situation so perfectly.  If you or a friend are living in this hell please find some help.  This is not a home.  Take care.   James
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Angel,
Succint and well done, enjoyed the read.
angel girl
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4 posted 03-11-2000 12:33 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thankyou all for your responses. I don't know anyone currently living like this, but I have known those who have. I think abuse is something that should be made more aware of.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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