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I Came Home Tonight
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I Came Home Tonight |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
I Came Home Tonight I came home. You were mad. We were alone. This made you glad. You came at me. I tried to duck. I was too late. My face was struck. Falling down, You kicked my head. On the ground, My face bled. Pain shot through me With every blow. I wanted to flee And from this Earth go. My wish was granted. I died that night. Heaven I was granted. I came Home tonight. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
wow i dont know what to say this is a great poem but i hope you just made this up.best wishes to you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a very well written poem it has described the situation so perfectly. If you or a friend are living in this hell please find some help. This is not a home. Take care. James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angel, Succint and well done, enjoyed the read. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Thankyou all for your responses. I don't know anyone currently living like this, but I have known those who have. I think abuse is something that should be made more aware of. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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