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Spring Seduction

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Diana B
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0 posted 03-10-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Diana B   Email Diana B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Diana B

On my window
raindrops knock
for my attention
smell of springs
liquid dimension.
Black birds cawing
barren shadowed trees
roads glisten charcoal
tires splashing water
rhythm with the wipers.
Earths rawest fragrance seeping
through my open window,
puddled daylight
breaks on far horizon,
dreams suspended in a
timeless river
of springs seduction.
Burrowed deeper
into the mattress
seeking mellow memories
of buds sunlighted into bloom
and a new lover resting
contented
on my pillow.


© Copyright 2000 Diana B - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 03-10-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Spring definantly has that feeling of seduction to it!!! You've painted the picture well- WELCOME!!!!

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mystery
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2 posted 03-10-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

WELCOME TO PASSIONS, WHAT A WAY TO GET US READY FOR SPRING!!, NICE POEM.
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3 posted 03-10-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I love this...it's already spring here....please check your email for a special welcome.  
Alwye
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A very beautiful poem, welcome to passions!  You've really made me wish that it was spring..oh well, it'll be here before long.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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with you


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Diana B~ Welcome! Wow! This is great!!   -SEA
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This is beautiful, Diana! Very beautiful!

Denise
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Dear Diana  

This is a lovely poem.  Beautiful descriptions.

Poeminister

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