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Diana B
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since 2000-03-10
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0 posted 2000-03-10 12:10 PM


On my window
raindrops knock
for my attention
smell of springs
liquid dimension.
Black birds cawing
barren shadowed trees
roads glisten charcoal
tires splashing water
rhythm with the wipers.
Earths rawest fragrance seeping
through my open window,
puddled daylight
breaks on far horizon,
dreams suspended in a
timeless river
of springs seduction.
Burrowed deeper
into the mattress
seeking mellow memories
of buds sunlighted into bloom
and a new lover resting
contented
on my pillow.



© Copyright 2000 Diana B - All Rights Reserved
devina
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Cali
1 posted 2000-03-10 12:13 PM


Spring definantly has that feeling of seduction to it!!! You've painted the picture well- WELCOME!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

mystery
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2 posted 2000-03-10 12:17 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS, WHAT A WAY TO GET US READY FOR SPRING!!, NICE POEM.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-03-10 12:41 PM


Welcome to the family! I love this...it's already spring here....please check your email for a special welcome.  

Alwye
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4 posted 2000-03-10 10:13 PM


A very beautiful poem, welcome to passions!  You've really made me wish that it was spring..oh well, it'll be here before long.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~


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with you
5 posted 2000-03-11 12:22 PM


Diana B~ Welcome! Wow! This is great!!   -SEA
Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-12 10:45 PM


This is beautiful, Diana! Very beautiful!

Denise

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7 posted 2000-03-12 10:59 PM


Dear Diana  

This is a lovely poem.  Beautiful descriptions.

Poeminister

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