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why dance with a hero

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infinat3 sadn3ss
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somerset england


0 posted 03-10-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

Dont you go with him ,
he only has his ego ,
but i cant really judge ,
i dont exactly have the wings of an eagle.

He doesnt look into your eyes ,
and never gasps in utter surprise.

Dont dance with him , he is a hero
why have him when you can have a zero .
He doesnt know you or understand ,
he just wants to hold your hand ,
but dont get me wrong , thats what i want to do ,
i want to glance inside of you too .

so you see , that you can dance with him .
Just make sure you come back to me


[This message has been edited by infinat3 sadn3ss (edited 03-10-2000).]
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mete out
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1 posted 03-10-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Cabes,
Oh how I love this one...the 1st full poem you ever showed me...nostalgia at it's finest!
I love where this one came from too...

"B.L.O.N...Oh...whatever!"

all mine,
lou   xxx
Thinker
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2 posted 03-13-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for Thinker   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Thinker

Great work Cabes,
I don't get how people like you and Louise can get emotions down on paper, but you do it amazingly well.
Great poem.
Don't forget there are people here for you to talk to.
Ryan.


 To think is a right
To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance
PEACEMAKER
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Sydney N.S.W Australia


3 posted 03-13-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for PEACEMAKER   Email PEACEMAKER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PEACEMAKER

loved it, had me thinking after ever line
can't wait till i read your next
 
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