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Open Poetry #6

Red Wine and Honey

Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 2000-03-10 04:51 AM

Red Wine and Honey

I would that my heart be of stone my love
Desiring not the enchantment of thy warm embrace.
Pray tell why hast thou captured this knights heart fair maid
only to tease the longings of my soul with thy wondrous pleasures?
Surely a spell ye have cast upon this knight .
Moreover ye know but a whisper from thy lips
brings forth longings and desires of only thee.
Were you not the passion my soul hungers for
And water ever to my wildest thirst?
I would desert my heart's longings and be set free
But alas I cannot for thy prisoner am I.
You were liken unto red wine and honey
And thy aroma delighted my senses with its sweetness.
The very depths of my soul sung forth the joy of mine eyes.
As I gazed upon thy beauty, thoughts of you gently caressed my mind.
Your presence embraces my soul even now my love,
Liken unto a soft lingering kiss from a lovers lips.
Harken unto my plea fair maid I beg of thee,
bind not mine heart that I might know completeness once more.

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Loneheart

Enola
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

1 posted 2000-03-10 04:59 AM

I can't think of anything to say except that, this is amazing!

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2000-03-10 08:15 AM

Oh I love this, I think thy name should be braveheart for a knight, a prince whos words capture the soul of this fair maiden...( Which happens to be One of My poems title)
Brave with words so true, For thy eyes to look upon, for thy ears to hear, unto thy heart to be filled completly!

"Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

3 posted 2000-03-11 07:42 PM

I truly love to post in this community
because of just such wonderful replies

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