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Entangled Thoughts

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Venusfly
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0 posted 03-09-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Venusfly   Email Venusfly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Venusfly


Out on the water,
Thinking of you.
Moonlit small waves,
I wish you were here.  
Slowly rocking the boat,
A desire so strong.  
In the silence of the night,
The distance so wide.  
The stars are so still,
A volunteering passion.  
Feeling the cold from the wetness beneath,
The warmth of your body.  
The calmness of thoughts,
Holding you tight.  
A slice of paradise,
A bed full of roses.
To know that you exist,
Dedicated just to you.  
And someday I will be there,
Open hearts and open minds.  
In front of your door with flowers in hand.  
Will you let me in?

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tulip
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1 posted 03-09-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

All I have to say is "Wow"!
EagleScorpion
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since 03-08-2000
Posts 1705
Here, Now, Forever


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You know, I really admire the way you can put simple words together to create such an enduring picture. Volunteering passion.. perhaps??
Severn
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3 posted 03-10-2000 06:22 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice!



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