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Open Poetry #6

Entangled Thoughts

Venusfly
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 28
Michigan

0 posted 2000-03-09 11:32 PM

Out on the water,
Thinking of you.
Moonlit small waves,
I wish you were here.
Slowly rocking the boat,
A desire so strong.
In the silence of the night,
The distance so wide.
The stars are so still,
A volunteering passion.
Feeling the cold from the wetness beneath,
The warmth of your body.
The calmness of thoughts,
Holding you tight.
A slice of paradise,
A bed full of roses.
To know that you exist,
Dedicated just to you.
And someday I will be there,
Open hearts and open minds.
In front of your door with flowers in hand.
Will you let me in?

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

1 posted 2000-03-09 11:35 PM

All I have to say is "Wow"!

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2000-03-09 11:36 PM

You know, I really admire the way you can put simple words together to create such an enduring picture. Volunteering passion.. perhaps??

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-03-10 06:22 AM

Very nice!

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

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