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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pretty She thinks she is not pretty, How wrong can someone be? She looks into the mirror, With eyes of misery. I wish I were that mirror, Reflecting in her eyes. She would see such loveness, She never could surmise. Deep within upon a shelf, The treasure of her goal. Shining in her secret self, The lovely of her soul. For sure there was a curtain, She placed there years ago. A dark and misty closure I'm sure that made it so. But her charisma shines within, Just a fraction, below the skin. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Gently smiling at this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, it seems you've honored her prettiness with an equally pretty poem...very sweet. ~ Claire |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Nice. Man, it's simply strange how some really hot girls can be so critical about themselves when they are so darn stunning. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I could not agree with this poem more. Excellently written and very accurate  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Seymour... this is SO sweet and written with such tenderness and heart...a perfect love poem... true love is blind by sight and sees with the heart... your talent shines in this..very nice janet marie you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your smile brings me happiness. *L* Meadow, You are too kind. *L* Eagle, Isn't that the truth. Balladeer, Thanks for the agree and excellent. Janet, Great comment, thank you. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Seymour This is absolutly gorgeous. The person that you wrote about is very lucky to have you. A fantastic piece. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, the beauty from within your poem delights my heart. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
This is really good, Seymour. I really like it. It makes me smile. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes I wish we could see ourselves as other do......or do I? hehehehe This is excellent, as usual, Sy! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really nice Seymour...its sad that you can see her beauty and she cannot. James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mete, Thank you for the coment and read. Martie, Always aim to delight. *L* Angel, Thank you for the nice comment. Jmlee, It happens, thank you for the read and comment. Denise, That is so true. *L* |
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Diana B Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 97 |
this is the voice of love...so beautifully spoken |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Diana, I thank you Diana, for the read and lovely comment. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Perhaps she needs someone to place A mirror right before her face And pull the curtain veil away So she can see the light of day Lovely poem Love ya Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Pretty is the poetry Written with such grace May the mirror now reflect What's truly on her face Love Pepper |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nailed the essence of True Beauty here Seymor! Wonderful! |
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