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So Far Gone

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busylisa_ca
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0 posted 03-09-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

So Far Gone

Everything we had came
and in a flash it was gone.
I thought blood was thicker than water,
Or the sun was brighter than the moon.

Not in a flash, but in an instant
It was thrown away
Nothing to say or do could help
Only a look of devistation and despair.

I never thought anything would come between us
But obviously it was all a fantasy
Now there is no one to turn to
or even to count on
How could such a great thing
turn into something so sour.

I layed it all on the line
And decided it wasn't worth the pain
and agony that was running my heart
While my feelings and dreams come to an end.

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mete out
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 03-10-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This is such a sad poem.
You put across your loss really well in this.
I know you must feel bad, but here at Passions, you are in our hearts always.

*hug*


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
twinsgd
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2 posted 03-11-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for twinsgd   Email twinsgd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinsgd

Very sad Lisa , but you can and will turn it around. need a shoulder ....call me..always on line even if invisible.
 
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