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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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We dashed into a lingerie shop, to escape San Francisco rain, you teasingly pointed to this and that, in shades of champagne and sea foam. Store clerks buzzed all around, but all my senses were with you, as your caress slid into my mind, spreading the liquid silk of sighs. Allowing anticipation to grow, you leaned in close to whisper, a suggestion not of what to wear, but of what might lie under. How those ladies must have gasped, when you entered my dressing room, helped me out of that filmy frock, and into the secrets of you. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Okay....i think it's time for me to turn on a fan now.....whew!  You have a way of evoking strong feelings and images with only a few words...I envy that. Excellent poem.  Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, on this naughty note, a cold shower is in order. Adventurous arn't we, what other strange places do you take men to.... no don't answer. show me.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Bobbycat, very kind of you. Parker, what else is life but adventure, eh? Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ A great big grin here !  Me? Matchmaking ? Seems you're doing a-okay, girlfriend ! Hi, Parker ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, Marge, Marge, whatever am I to do with you? Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just love me for my antics ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I do, Marge, I do!!! Cor |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Corinne, this is wonderful! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne, this is too much, loved it! How come something like that never happened to me? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent work, Corrine. lol, evokes a lot of imagery with very few words.. Wonderful job! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ Whew! Bringing heat to a rainy night! Way to go! Love it! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds real silky to me...I saw this in a movie onetime but I can't remember the name. Did this really happen..it must have been fun. James |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, Martie, Alwye, Sea and James. James, I'll never tell! Corinne |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
whew! Corinne. SF was never like this when I lived there. Sounds like I should move back to CA. (VBS) Rick |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Cali calls.... VBS Core |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved the title Then I loved the poem Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew...this one sizzles |
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Alice New Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 3 |
corinne, this is so sensual.. if this didn't happen, then it should have I like the way you continually stoked the images.. keeping them hot....alice |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
MO answers... VBS Rick |
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