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Corinne
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0 posted 03-09-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne


We dashed into a lingerie shop,
to escape San Francisco rain,
you teasingly pointed to this and that,
in shades of champagne and sea foam.

Store clerks buzzed all around,
but all my senses were with you,
as your caress slid into my mind,
spreading the liquid silk of sighs.

Allowing anticipation to grow,
you leaned in close to whisper,
a suggestion not of what to wear,
but of what might lie under.

How those ladies must have gasped,
when you entered my dressing room,
helped me out of that filmy frock,
and into the secrets of you.


2000 Corinne Bailey

© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
bobbycat
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1 posted 03-09-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Okay....i think it's time for me to turn on a fan now.....whew!     You have a way of evoking strong feelings and images with only a few words...I envy that.  Excellent poem.  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~

Parker
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... the old black rum


2 posted 03-09-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Well, on this naughty note, a cold shower is in order. Adventurous arn't we, what other strange places do you take  men to.... no don't answer. show me.  
Corinne
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3 posted 03-09-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thanks Bobbycat, very kind of you.

Parker, what else is life but adventure, eh?

Corinne
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4 posted 03-09-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~

A great big grin here !  

Me?  Matchmaking ?  

Seems you're doing a-okay, girlfriend !

Hi, Parker  

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
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5 posted 03-10-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Marge, Marge, Marge, whatever am I to do with you?

Corinne
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6 posted 03-10-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Just love me for my antics !  

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
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7 posted 03-10-2000 08:29 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I do, Marge, I do!!!

Cor
Denise
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8 posted 03-10-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Corinne, this is wonderful!  

Denise
Martie
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Corinne, this is too much, loved it!  How come something like that never happened to me?
Alwye
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In the space between moments


10 posted 03-11-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Exellent work, Corrine.  lol, evokes a lot of imagery with very few words..   Wonderful job!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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with you


11 posted 03-11-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Corinne~ Whew! Bringing heat to a rainy night! Way to go! Love it!   -SEA
JamesMichael
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12 posted 03-11-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sounds real silky to me...I saw this in a movie onetime but I can't remember the name.  Did this really happen..it must have been fun.   James
Corinne
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13 posted 03-12-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, Denise, Martie, Alwye, Sea and James.  James, I'll never tell!

Corinne
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14 posted 03-29-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

whew!  Corinne.   SF was never like this when I lived there.  Sounds like I should move back to CA.  (VBS)

Rick
Corinne
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15 posted 03-30-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Cali calls....

VBS

Core
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 03-30-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I loved the title
Then I loved the poem
Liz
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17 posted 03-30-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew...this one sizzles  
Alice
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18 posted 03-30-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Alice   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Alice

corinne, this is so sensual.. if this didn't happen, then it should have   I like the way you continually stoked the images.. keeping them hot....alice
RAM
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19 posted 03-30-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

MO answers...    

VBS

Rick
 
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