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Marilyn
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0 posted 03-09-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

I'm lost here without you,
Though I know we've never touched.
Knowing where to find you,
Has been my comfort and my trust.

The comfort in your baratone,
Has soothed me right to sleep.
Even in your confusion,
In your heart I've had a peek.

No contact is there possible,
For 21 whole days.
I go around absently,
Lost in a total haze.

Tell me what this really means,
This missing you I feel?
Have I really lost my mind,
Or just missing my last meal?

Is this love or just a dream?
I've built my world upon.
Are you right there missing me,
As this time moves on?
© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
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1 posted 03-09-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh my Lady Marilyn,

Trust me when I say that anyone who knows you.....and has not spoken to you in a while.....YES....they miss you.  I  truly believe that.  No doubt in my mind...so let there be no doubt in yours.

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Munda
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2 posted 03-09-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Marilyn, what a yearning poem ! Gee, girl some strong emotions here. Liked it a lot how you translated this feeling into words  
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3 posted 03-09-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn~

Longingly lovely.
This should reach out and touch him.
~*Marge*~


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busylisa_ca
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4 posted 03-09-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

Just remember, "absence makes the heart grow fonder"

beautiful poem.
Balladeer
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5 posted 03-09-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A lot of emotion on display here, Marilyn. Missing someone is one of the strongest of feelings.
Marilyn
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6 posted 03-10-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

David....You are so sweet.   Thankyou for your words of encouragement, they mean a lot to me.

Munda...Thankyou.  

Marge...I do hope it touches him. He knows how I feel. I am just unsure if he returns those feelings. That is the difficult part of it. I know he cares but as deeply as I do?

busylisa....I do hope so.  

Dear One....You are very right with that statement.  
 
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