San Jose, CA, USA
JML- Well, its no longer a question of will I win her heart. That quest was failed awhile ago. Now I am just looking for a way to say goodbye. It is not she that doesnt deserve me, it is I who does not deserve her. She is the most wonderful, sweet, intelligent person I have ever met, and beautiful too. I am an overweight slacker who lacks the traits she is looking for. I want her to remember me, as I shall remember her.
angel girl- I dunno, maybe you are reading this letter wrong, but this is saying goodbye, I will likely never see you again. What you want is a love letter, which this is not
Meadowmuse- Dont apologize, you didnt overstep anything. I found your version of my poem wonderful. It was slightly different than what I was looking for, but it was wonderful nonetheless.