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Dedicated in the loving memory of a close friend

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15z_guardian_angel
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0 posted 03-09-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for 15z_guardian_angel   Email 15z_guardian_angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 15z_guardian_angel

Sitting here all alone
On this cold Winter night
I'm wishing I could hear you once again
I'm wishing you could hold me tight
I want you to come back to me
Why do we have to be apart
I'm missing you endlessly
Because I loved you with every beat of my heart
Oh how I despise that awful day
When you had to go away
I though you and I would always last
But you slipped out of my life so fast

Why did you have to go
Why couldn't you just stay
Here inside my arms
Always
Why did you go away
I'd bring you back if I could
And if only I could trade
I would

Sitting here all alone
On this awful summer's day
The sun doesn't shine in my world anymore
Since you went away
I'm trying to pick up all the pieces
Because you once made me feel whole
But now without you in my life
I feel like I'm losing control
Oh how I despise that awful day
Because I'll never be able to hear you say
That I'm the one that your heart beats for
Because I know that it's silent forever more

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mete out
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1 posted 03-10-2000 04:39 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Angel,
I feel so bad for you. I have never experienced this kind of loss before and I am unsure of what to say...
I'm glad you are at least trying now to pick up the pieces of your life again....
This is a beautiful poem and I'm sure your loved one is smiling down on you.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
Enola
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2 posted 03-10-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

This is such a touching poem.  It seems so horribly ironic really, how something so wonderful came from something so tragic.  I hope everything goes alright for you and we get to see some more of your fantastic work soon.    

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Severn
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3 posted 03-10-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow - how awful for you...many hugs.

You have written a loving poem full of plaintive loss - and it is well written, angel.

Please know that you are safe here to express your sorrow.



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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4 posted 03-10-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This poem just made me feel so sad. There's no other way to say how I felt. Reading this theme in a poem just about breaks my heart.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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5 posted 03-10-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

GuardianAngel~
Sad for you, I know.
You did a wonderful job of expressing
your emotions.
to Passion's.
~*Marge*~




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destiny502
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6 posted 03-10-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for destiny502   Email destiny502   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for destiny502

*sigh*
ive been there a few times and i know how badly it hurts.  im here and i got icq..drop me a line id be glad to talk =)
Aimster
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7 posted 03-10-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

One of those few poems that really touched my heart! I realize this hurts like hell, but I hope things get better for you. This work was so beautifully expressive.

take care,
amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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