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Sven
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0 posted 03-09-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Every I love you
Is like the petal of a flower
Caressing the skin on my cheek
Soft and warm
Fragrant and colorful
It lingers on my mind
And leaves its imprint on my heart

Every smile
Is like an unspoken bond
Between not only friends, but lovers
Quiet and delicate
Strong and knowing
It hovers in my ears
And stays in my heart

Every loving touch
Is like a kiss between us
Fingers lingering here and there
Firm and yielding
Comforting and loving
They leave their prints on my skin
And their trails on my soul.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 03-09-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Big freakin' sigh.....    yeah, you're way too mushy for me right now!  hehe  Sorry, but this mushy stuff just doesn't cut it right now, ya know?  LOL  I guess it's great if you're in love!  Congrats on having your neck in the noose.....er....I mean....congrats on being in love!   ROFLMAO  Ah come on - I gotta give SOMEONE a hard time!  Sheesh.....  
Marina
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2 posted 03-09-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, such a romantic piece.  I'm sure your "true" maiden must appreciate your talents.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-09-2000).]
Honeybee
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3 posted 03-09-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Sven, this is a beautifully written romantic poem.  You capture the essence of love's effect so well with your words.  Sigh, I wish that I could feel love the way you have expressed it.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 03-09-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Ahhhhhhh....you are amazing and so is your effect on my heart. You could melt all the ice in Alaska with your work!!   I loved it!!!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 03-09-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

It's like a beautiful poem
written from the hand of
a poet in love....


good poem!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 03-09-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"Its Like"...perfect poerty...thats what!!!
sigh...very sweet Sven..as always...
jm

 you're really alone at last...
you're bored and fading fast,
if it's true you'll fall from the past
all you'll have to do is ask
you'll feel but never be
you want and always need
price you pay for wanting to see
will you have all you've ever dreamed...
robin wilson

Corinne
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7 posted 03-09-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Sven, what a sweet soul you are!

Corinne
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 03-09-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Poet Sven~

You've caressed a lot of hearts
with words from your own.

Exquisite.

For the first time,
I wish Ron had sound on here
so you could hear the *sighs*.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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9 posted 03-09-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Wow. . . I'm just a bit speechless. . .

I wish that I could hear all of the "sighs" too. . .

I just don't know what to say. . .you're all so wonderful. . .thank you. . . your words mean a lot. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Parker
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10 posted 03-09-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Sven, astounding, you are the king with this one.

Parker
Gemini
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11 posted 03-09-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Sven, very sweet, very beautiful.
vandana
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12 posted 06-23-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Wow!I loved it a lot.:
Sunshine
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13 posted 09-19-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

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