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Sven
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0 posted 2000-03-09 03:56 PM


Every I love you
Is like the petal of a flower
Caressing the skin on my cheek
Soft and warm
Fragrant and colorful
It lingers on my mind
And leaves its imprint on my heart

Every smile
Is like an unspoken bond
Between not only friends, but lovers
Quiet and delicate
Strong and knowing
It hovers in my ears
And stays in my heart

Every loving touch
Is like a kiss between us
Fingers lingering here and there
Firm and yielding
Comforting and loving
They leave their prints on my skin
And their trails on my soul.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 2000-03-09 04:04 PM


Big freakin' sigh.....    yeah, you're way too mushy for me right now!  hehe  Sorry, but this mushy stuff just doesn't cut it right now, ya know?  LOL  I guess it's great if you're in love!  Congrats on having your neck in the noose.....er....I mean....congrats on being in love!   ROFLMAO  Ah come on - I gotta give SOMEONE a hard time!  Sheesh.....  
Marina
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2 posted 2000-03-09 05:14 PM


Sven, such a romantic piece.  I'm sure your "true" maiden must appreciate your talents.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-09-2000).]

Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-03-09 05:21 PM



Sven, this is a beautifully written romantic poem.  You capture the essence of love's effect so well with your words.  Sigh, I wish that I could feel love the way you have expressed it.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

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4 posted 2000-03-09 06:48 PM


Ahhhhhhh....you are amazing and so is your effect on my heart. You could melt all the ice in Alaska with your work!!   I loved it!!!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-03-09 09:00 PM


It's like a beautiful poem
written from the hand of
a poet in love....


good poem!

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-03-09 09:23 PM


"Its Like"...perfect poerty...thats what!!!
sigh...very sweet Sven..as always...
jm

 you're really alone at last...
you're bored and fading fast,
if it's true you'll fall from the past
all you'll have to do is ask
you'll feel but never be
you want and always need
price you pay for wanting to see
will you have all you've ever dreamed...
robin wilson


Corinne
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7 posted 2000-03-09 09:35 PM


Sven, what a sweet soul you are!

Corinne

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-03-09 09:41 PM


Oh, Poet Sven~

You've caressed a lot of hearts
with words from your own.

Exquisite.

For the first time,
I wish Ron had sound on here
so you could hear the *sighs*.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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9 posted 2000-03-09 10:36 PM


Wow. . . I'm just a bit speechless. . .

I wish that I could hear all of the "sighs" too. . .

I just don't know what to say. . .you're all so wonderful. . .thank you. . . your words mean a lot. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Parker
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10 posted 2000-03-09 10:43 PM


Sven, astounding, you are the king with this one.

Parker

Gemini
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11 posted 2000-03-09 10:55 PM


Sven, very sweet, very beautiful.
vandana
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12 posted 2000-06-23 07:41 PM


Wow!I loved it a lot.:
Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-09-19 05:47 PM


sigh
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