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Ouch (or... The Return of the Bane)

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Mike
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0 posted 03-09-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Pain does return,
I cannot spurn,
Insidious pain,
O' curs'ed bane.

I feared pain not,
But I forgot,
Such agony,
"blank" cavity.

To tooth beseech,
Would use a leach,
To lift your curse,
Pain can't be worse.

To dentist go,
Tell tale of woe,
Sharp needle first,
Now which hurts worst?

X-rays taken,
Drill's a shakin'
Tooth's done capped,
With bill, I'm tapped.

I head away,
Hear dentist say,
Advice from me,
To stay pain free.

A gift to use,
To rid pain's blues,
To me does toss,
Transcendental floss.

A follow-up to the very nearly legendary "Bane of Pain"

© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-09-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

LOL....wonderful. I'm going to call you Bill from now on...for this is surely something William Shakespeare would have written. You've done a marvelous job with this!  
Martie
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2 posted 03-09-2000 03:30 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is not a laughing matter...but your bane has got me insane and the floss
I'm at a loss, to come across
with a reply ...poor baby!

You must feel better, else how would you have written such a clever poem?  
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 03-09-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Eewww OUCH.  This was not what I was expecting when I opened it!  LOL   You gave me the willies reading this...(shivering still & flinching)  Er....very....um....interesting!  
Mike
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4 posted 03-10-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I have more silver in my mouth than a table service for eight...
thanks for comments...
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5 posted 03-10-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is delightful, Mike!  

Denise
 
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