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angel girl
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0 posted 03-09-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

RAPED

How could you do this to me?
You tore my soul apart.
Because of you, my joy did flee.
Now all I know is agony.

I trusted you and I was betrayed.
You raped me; now in hell  I will stay.
Because you sinned, I have to pay
For today and all eternity.
© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-09-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Heavy title and strong content.
Don't know if this really happened to you but if it did then your state of mind concerns me. If a trusted friend violated you I can understand your agony.  Hope you will get help to get beyond this. If talking helps, e-mail me anytime.
busylisa_ca
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2 posted 03-09-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

very serious poem. Unfortunately too many people have to experience this dreadful experience, I hope your not one of them.

busylisa
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-09-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

angel girl,
I tried as long as I could not to read and then as I passed by another time I couldn't let pain keep me out.  This poem is the start to a release of pain...let it out my friend and know that kind hearts are here to listen.  The words you wrote show so much pain and above all else it shows that you have courage. E-mail me anytime I will never judge you and sometimes we find comfort in venting to those who never see us....this I speak from being there myself.  
EagleScorpion
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4 posted 03-10-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

OFF with his head! He deserves it no longer! (and i dont mean the one on his neck, either)
AnthonyEV1
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5 posted 03-10-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for AnthonyEV1   Email AnthonyEV1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit AnthonyEV1's Home Page   View IP for AnthonyEV1

Very good poem, I'm sorry for your pain  though...    I'm a guy and may not be able to help you as much as a girl could that has been through it, but if you do need someone to talk to I am here. Just icq me or email me. This is something no one should have to go through, and it seems to be happening more and more these days. It's very said and disapointing as to what the world is coming to.  But just remember, if talking would help you, you have gotten a few replies from people that would help you, and so would I if you want it. If you don't want to talk about it thats fine though, writing poems is a good way to vent and to heal yourself.
angel girl
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6 posted 03-10-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thankyou all for your comments. This poem was really hard for me to write. Unfortunately, I did write this from experience. I went through this twice by two people I had trusted, my father and my step-brother. The latter was not even two years ago, when I was 15. Somehow, knowing that no one knows who I really am helps me to talk about it. I have seen several psychologists, and none of them have helped me as much as all of you have. Thankyou again for listening to me vent.
EagleOne
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7 posted 03-11-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

There is much pain in this. I have some understanding of your feelings, I personally know 2 people who have had to expeirenced this outrage. Being able to vent your feelings will aid the healing , and you will will find much support here.
angel girl
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8 posted 03-13-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

I do find much support here, and I have all of you to thank for it.
serenity blaze
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9 posted 03-14-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

angel girl--a survivor 'sister'--how well i
understand.   Remember always that they did
not touch the 'you' in you, and don't be afraid to feel the rage...that is your right.
e mail if you need to talk.
angel girl
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10 posted 03-19-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thankyou, serenity. However, I feel much of the time that the real "me" was touched, beaten, bruised, and destroyed.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

RainbowGirl
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11 posted 03-19-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sweetheart: You haven't been destroyed but it takes an incredible amount of strength to find *you* again and you'll probably always be more vulnerable but you can grow from this but it will take courage and a lot of it, you'll need the support of your friends but even if you don't have that, you will still be a very beautiful person and don't shake your head at me, cause you're here and that is half the battle...

Big HUGS sweetheart
ken
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12 posted 03-19-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for ken   Email ken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ken's Home Page   View IP for ken

Appalling, the only word I can describle such actions by an indivisual.
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 03-19-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Angel...I can relate to this and my heart goes out to you. ((((HUGS))))
serenity blaze
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14 posted 03-19-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Forgive me, angel, as i had no intention of telling you what to feel.  Love to you.
Irie
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Angel....I don't know what to say. I'm sorry doesn't seem right, I can't say that I know how you feel, because I don't. What's worse is the fact that a family member has done this, not one but two.
I guess all that I can tell you is that I feel for you and you are in my prayers. The power of prayer is strong and gives one strength.
And as many others have said, if you need to talk...ICQ me or e-mail me. I'm here to help if I can. Sometimes a stranger is the best medicine. Much love to you and GREAT BIG hugs....or a shoulder to punch if you need.  

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 03-20-2000).]
angel girl
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16 posted 03-20-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Rainbow-Thanks. I can't tell you how many times I have come close to not being here. It's really hard to stay.

Ken-I agree. I still find it hard to believe.

Hoot-Thankyou for your understanding and kindness.

Serenity-I'm sorry if it seemed like I was fussing at you. I wasn't. I just get so confused and I don't know what to do or say sometimes.

Irie-Thanks. I think the hardest thing is that my step-brother knew about what my father did to me and he still went ahead to hurt me.
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