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To Give Thee My Love

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 03-08-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

What shall I offer thee?
The roses of a garden in bloom,
To give thee my love,

I shall sing sweet tunes,
A lovers lullaby,
To our loves melody,
To answer thy hearts faint cry,

For the sun shines brightly upon your hair,
Mine eyes are captured by your lenghthy stare,
The trees, They shadow thy face,
Thy heart is humbled by your grace,

What shall I offer thee my love?
A token, of words passionately spoken,
Thy bittersweet tears in a bottle,
To give thee my love,

I offer no more, no less,
A love truest of trues,
One of deepest joy that knows no sorrow,

I offer thee this journey, this romantic quest,
For thy soul speaks softly,
Without a shout, but a whisper

Thy heart feels thy soul around thee,
As the warmth of the sun upon thy skin,

Thy heart is in thy hands,
For thee alone, no mortal does not understand,

Thy earthly kingdoms will fall all around thee,
For thy kingdom is only your love,
Never shall it be over-thrown,
Nor cast into the deep seas,

For thy love, thy words has captured me,
Thy heart has wings of butterflies,
It dreams, dreams where angels sleep,
Where fairies trod to love for keep,

For thee my love, Thy heart shall I keep,
Whatever thou love bestows,
Thy love shall overcome,

For thy heart weeps till morning,
Morning to night,
Thou is lost in dreams,
Dreaming dreams of loves' flight,

What shall I give thee my love?
Thy heart, thy soul, thy flesh,
Thy dreams, thy life, thy death,
Even thy last breath?

Whatever is ask of thee,
I would endure ten thousand pains,
Travel near or far,
Follow any star,
To give thee thy love,



 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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Denise
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1 posted 03-08-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, RH! Simply beautiful! Sounds like love to me!

Denise
Mike
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2 posted 03-08-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

A song of nightingale from forth her lips doth flow,

Enjoyed your poetry fair maiden.
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 03-09-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Dee as always you make my day! Thanks for your inspiration and encouragement,most of all your friendship!

Sir Mike, thou knowest thee well,from the lips of the nightingale...Tweet, tweet!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


AngelDust
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4 posted 03-09-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for AngelDust   Email AngelDust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelDust

Very nicely writen!  I especialy like your use of the middle English words (Thy, thee, ect..)  Great job

Love it here at Passions!  Thanks for writing so much good reading material guys!

  -Angel-
tracie66
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5 posted 03-09-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

this was so romantic and I just wanted it to go on forever. well done  
Tracie


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A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 03-09-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Welcome angeldust...like your name! You will enjoy this family of poets, glad to have you
on board!!! Thanks

Tracie, welcome too! I haven't been on in awhile, alot of new poets here! Thank you!
Happy to have you here!

I look forward toreading both of your poetry!
Parker
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7 posted 03-09-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Romantic Heart, you are truly a gifted writer. William would be proud, and probably flirting with you.....

Whatever is ask of thee,
I would endure ten thousand pains,
Travel near or far,
Follow any star,
To give thee thy love,

........ Do you own a car, and can you follow these road map directions.  

Parker

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 03-09-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

yes I own a car, can travel near or far,
I think WILLIAM IS flirting with me!  
My hair is naturally raven,hehe!I have always wanted to vacation in Ireland!
As a WHITE ROSE PETAL,or as a OCEAN,maybe a FLOWER or ROSE!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare




[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-09-2000).]
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 03-09-2000 05:43 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Parker: Road map directions to where?
I have already been to your home page and I have read all your poems. Loved them!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

First__Knight
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10 posted 03-10-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Passion truly runs over in this......I am fully moved by your words of giving and desire.  Romance at the peak I would say
A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 03-10-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

As always, thank you first knight for your kind and sweet replies!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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