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The night that we fell in love
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The night that we fell in love |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
From now on, some of my poems will be like this because it makes me more versatile.his was the different style that I talked about in my Proceed poem. I was inspired by poets like Seymore, Hoot, Liz, Michael, Denise, and any other poet that that has that extra fire that lifts them over the average poet. It was a quiet night on the beach, as the moon shined across the dark sea. We walked hand in hand, across the soft sand. I found a spot on the ground and together we sat down. I held you in my arms, to protect you from harm. You looked into my eyes and our passion rised. Soon our lips pressed against one another, as we realized that we were lovers. And from that day on, happiness was born. Her eyes sparkled like the stars above, on the night that we fell in love. Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Nate, It's beatiful....especially the description of her eyes...but then again eyes are my passion!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Fanning herself* Well Nate, I must say that I'm honored to have my name connected in any way with this one. Very passionate |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is so passionate and beautiful, Nate! I like this style. Thanks also for your lovely compliment of my writing. Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This does have some extra fire Nate...a very lovely moment. James |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ah, to be in love... Big sigh for your words so eloquently penned. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, Liked the feel, liked the words, liked the poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Nate~ I like the page you've turned. Romantically lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! A soft loving poem. I like it. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, I haven't had this much response in a while! I thank each and evry one of you! Nathan |
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