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The night that we fell in love

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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 03-08-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg


From now on, some of my poems will be like this because it makes me more versatile.his was the different style that I talked about in my Proceed poem. I was inspired by poets like Seymore, Hoot, Liz, Michael, Denise, and any other poet that that has that extra fire that lifts them over the average poet.

It was a quiet night on the beach,
as the moon shined across the dark sea.
We walked hand in hand,
across the soft sand.

I found a spot on the ground
and together we sat down.
I held you in my arms,
to protect you from harm.

You looked into my eyes
and our passion rised.
Soon our lips pressed against one another,
as we realized that we were lovers.

And from that day on,
happiness was born.
Her eyes sparkled like the stars above,
on the night that we fell in love.


 Nathan
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 03-08-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Nate,
It's beatiful....especially the description of her eyes...but then again eyes are my passion!  
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 03-08-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*Fanning herself*   Well Nate, I must say that I'm honored to have my name connected in any way with this one. Very passionate  
Denise
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3 posted 03-08-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! This is so passionate and beautiful, Nate! I like this style. Thanks also for your lovely compliment of my writing.  

Denise
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


4 posted 03-09-2000 04:57 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This does have some extra fire Nate...a very lovely moment.   James
sonjes
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5 posted 03-09-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Ah, to be in love...  Big sigh for your words so eloquently penned.

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 03-09-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nate,
Liked the feel, liked the words, liked the poem.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 03-09-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Nate~

I like the page you've turned.
Romantically lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Poet deVine
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8 posted 03-09-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! A soft loving poem. I like it.
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
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Georgia, Fulton


9 posted 03-09-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow, I haven't had this much response in a while! I thank each and evry one of you!

 Nathan
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