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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Infinity Forever and Forever again Though I dared not, I tried not, I just could not win What is, shall be Endless pilgrims on the road They care not, they have not, They remain within Through the years of fear And all but one still remains For the flight tonight To transcend this common plane Still the closeness of darkness Leaves time intact For the one against whom All the cards seem stacked Solace I find in this thing That holds all my memory Helps me bear the heavy load, And understand a little bit of, Infinity |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ Excellent writting!  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Still the closeness of darkness Leaves time intact For the one against whom All the cards seem stacked Solace I find in this thing That holds all my memory Helps me bear the heavy load, And understand a little bit of, Infinity" i really like this verse..."speaks volumes" "infinity"... another great one...arent they all  stalking you still...jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This was an interesting piece to read...it could have many interpretations, I think. I like your phrasings, "sounds" and rhythms in reading it aloud. ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ Gosh, I like this. It 'talks' ... wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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