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Infinity
Forever and
Forever again
Though I dared not, I tried not,
I just could not win
What is, shall be
Endless pilgrims on the road
They care not, they have not,
They remain within
Through the years of fear
And all but one still remains
For the flight tonight
To transcend this common plane

Still the closeness of darkness
Leaves time intact
For the one against whom
All the cards seem stacked
Solace I find in this thing
That holds all my memory
Helps me bear the heavy load,
And understand a little bit of,
Infinity


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JML~ Excellent writting! -SEA
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Still the closeness of darkness
Leaves time intact
For the one against whom
All the cards seem stacked
Solace I find in this thing
That holds all my memory
Helps me bear the heavy load,
And understand a little bit of,
Infinity"

i really like this verse..."speaks volumes" "infinity"...
another great one...arent they all
stalking you still...jm



 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

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This was an interesting piece to read...it could have many interpretations, I think. I like your phrasings, "sounds" and rhythms in reading it aloud.

~ Claire
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JML~
Gosh, I like this.
It 'talks' ...
wonderful.
~*Marge*~


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