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~ Running Naked through the Trees ~

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poetFemmeFatale
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~  Running Naked through the Trees  ~

Nothing here to hide
as I stand here in your breeze
ever freely -
running naked through your trees...
Timeless is your gaze
as your eyes sweep o'er my soul
ever freely -
as your laughter makes me whole...
Nothing holds me back
you encourage me with love
ever freely -
on your wings, I soar above...
Priceless is your strength
I can always count on you
ever freely -
as you love me through and through.
Searched for you so long
now we love with breathless ease
ever freely -
you & I run through the trees...
Naked.


Love does not chain you down - it offers you wings to soar...and encourages you to do so.   pFF

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PoeticKnight
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1 posted 03-08-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Breath taking poem. I couldn't agree with you more.
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-08-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"as your eyes sweep o'er my soul".
I think that's what love does, sees beyond the physcial person and sees the soul within,
"ever freely".
So nice. (psssssssst, get some clothes on).
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 03-08-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh....Danny....er.....um....(getting clothes on right away so you don't die of laughter!)  ROFLMAO  Didn't mean to make you choke there!  hehe     I really didn't think anyone would notice in here!  LOL
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GREAT POEM! BUT I CAN ONLY IMAGINE WHAT TRUE LOVE FEELS LIKE, BECAUSE I HAVEN'T EXPERIENCED IT YET. BUT WHEN I VISUALIZED RUNNING THROUGH TREES NAKED AND COMBINE IT WITH LOVE, THEN I KNOW IT MUST BE A GOOD FEELING.
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Femme, your just a wanna be Jane, wheres Tarzan when you need him eh!..... I was going to do the Tarzan yell, but I can't spell it. Interesting effect the breeze has on you though. Oh did I say that out loud..... dum dum de dum dum.
I'm outta here.
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Running Bare?
Watch out for the thorns and twigs...sometimes they leave (leaf?) scars...
Martie
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lovely visuals here--makes me want to run somewhere naked, but it's raining...
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 03-08-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

MARTIE!!!   What are you thinking??  That makes it even better!   LOL  Now shuck those clothes and GO!   I'll cover for ya!  hehehe  (waggin head!)  
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pFF~ Wow! Loved the title....this is so beautiful.Made me feel so free!   -SEA
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I like the way you speak of true love and nature with the same characteristics... as if they are one in the same....  Very nice.
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Cute! We should all be so free.....
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Femme~
Nekkid is a good thing !
I like.
~*Marge*~


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Wonderful!!  I have done this (what? You're surprised?) and it's the best feeling in the world. . .

And now, Femme, would you and Martie like to join me in a quick gallop through the woods?  And btw, who cares if it's raining?  LOL

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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I can only echo the comments of MyPenNameIsSam.
poetFemmeFatale
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15 posted 03-09-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, I have gotten quite the variety of readers and replies on this one!  hehe  So nice to see some of you, glad you've all got clothes on too!   I could pick out each one of you and say something really sweet back, but I'll just say, "LET'S ALL GET NAKED AND RUN !!"  

Whew....talk about a stress reliever!   Thanks all!  Hey - - Watch out for that TReeeeee!!   BONK.    

(Sprinting off in the buff to look for someone!)  hehe    Catch you people later!   (cheesy grin!)  
Er....I better lay off the caffeine, 'eh?  No more.
 
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