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Wings Of Freedom (For Crayon King)

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 03-08-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Wings Of Freedom

The depth of my enchanting love
is like an opening flower bud
forever graced by the sun.
Your colorful crayons,
my colorful crayons
of undying love.

Cast me out upon the wind
with wings of freedom
I shall forever soar
as shall you
without my
wings.
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
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1 posted 03-08-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

love your style, great poem  
Poet deVine
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2 posted 03-08-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful what you've done with the form and the imagery! good poem..
merlynh
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3 posted 03-08-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for merlynh   Email merlynh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for merlynh

Such a door-in my heart this opens.  I know it well.
Walter Ego
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I am Walter Ego
The 'Stutes Alter Ego

You make up your mind !

Masterpieces you draw
or
On winds of freedom soar

I am Walter Ego
The 'Stutes Alter Ego
LittleBoyLost
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5 posted 03-14-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for LittleBoyLost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleBoyLost

Your format goes so well with your theme.  Thank you.  This was very good.
Denise
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6 posted 03-14-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely, NC! Enchanting!

Denise
Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 03-15-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Corazon, Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

Poet deVine, Thank you for reading and enjoying.

merlynh, Thanks for reading.

Walter Ego,
Decide my mind you say
I play in tune every day.
The heart an instrument
picks every increment
from buzzing of a bee
to whispering of a tree.
I play the wind as a harp
only the echo is sharp
the pitch comes mellow
as my emotions yellow
as brightest sun of day
smiles you a passing ray.

LittleBoyLost, Thanks for reading and replying, glad you liked it.

dsnyder, Thank you very much you are always so kind.

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 03-15-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

whose walter ego i love the name o yuh this poem is very good the lines lessen in length but it still carries its message without
 
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