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Open Poetry #6

Wings Of Freedom (For Crayon King)

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-03-08 03:38 PM

Wings Of Freedom

The depth of my enchanting love
is like an opening flower bud
forever graced by the sun.
Your colorful crayons,
my colorful crayons
of undying love.

Cast me out upon the wind
with wings of freedom
I shall forever soar
as shall you
without my
wings.

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

1 posted 2000-03-08 03:56 PM

love your style, great poem

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-03-08 07:30 PM

Wonderful what you've done with the form and the imagery! good poem..

merlynh
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

3 posted 2000-03-08 07:36 PM

Such a door-in my heart this opens. I know it well.

Walter Ego
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 5

4 posted 2000-03-14 08:11 PM

I am Walter Ego
The 'Stutes Alter Ego

You make up your mind !

Masterpieces you draw
or
On winds of freedom soar

I am Walter Ego
The 'Stutes Alter Ego

LittleBoyLost
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since 2000-03-14

Posts 28

5 posted 2000-03-14 08:19 PM

Your format goes so well with your theme. Thank you. This was very good.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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6 posted 2000-03-14 09:46 PM

Lovely, NC! Enchanting!

Denise

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

7 posted 2000-03-15 08:16 AM

Corazon, Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

Poet deVine, Thank you for reading and enjoying.

merlynh, Thanks for reading.

Walter Ego,
Decide my mind you say
I play in tune every day.
The heart an instrument
picks every increment
from buzzing of a bee
to whispering of a tree.
I play the wind as a harp
only the echo is sharp
the pitch comes mellow
as my emotions yellow
as brightest sun of day
smiles you a passing ray.

LittleBoyLost, Thanks for reading and replying, glad you liked it.

dsnyder, Thank you very much you are always so kind.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2000-03-15 08:23 AM

whose walter ego i love the name o yuh this poem is very good the lines lessen in length but it still carries its message without

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