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A muse of joy

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 03-08-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

              A muse of joy

Whispers floated across the room,
Silhouettes danced the wall in loom.
And music filled the in between
As colors crowned the perfect scene.

Echoes wondered into the street,
The sun was down and in retreat.
I wondered through the needles eye,
Underneath a consummate sky.

The birds flew in a southward trend,
And disappeared around the bend.
The ambience was sweet in smells,
That rode and held the evening bells.

And I was checked in magics glare,
Gone, yet held in an awesome stare.
Invented by a ponders bliss,      
Thrust by thoughts of a stolen kiss.

The kiss and bliss were fancies find.
Imagined in my censored mind.
And jubilation set my face,
As the ecstasy left its trace.

It was a weavers wile of joy,        
A fragile muse, a lovers ploy.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nurse Crachet
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1 posted 03-08-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Wow, this is excellent, you created quite the scene, I enjoyed very much.
Martie
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2 posted 03-08-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Your muse
your bliss
your stollen kiss
in poem so sweet
and not remiss

Lovely!
Mike
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3 posted 03-08-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed very much.  Nicely done.
EagleScorpion
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4 posted 03-08-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

Brilliant.
Cerenity
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5 posted 03-08-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

HI, Seymour Tabin

Very, Very Wonderful......


Thank you, Cerenity
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6 posted 03-08-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Seymour~this flowed so beautifully! Loved it!   -SEA
Meadowmuse
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A "weavers wile of joy" indeed
Need only to water its magic seed,
And breathe as finely fragrant hue
Colours the mind with fantasy's dew.

Seymour, your poem coloured my mind.

~ Claire
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 03-08-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nurse, Thank you for the WOW.

Martie, A sweet comment, thank you *L*

Mike, Glad you enjoyed.

Eagle, Very nice comment, thank you.

Cerenity, Hi thank you for the read and comment.

Sea, Beautiful comment, thank you.

Claire, A wonderful comment, I thank you much
*L*
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 03-08-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
'And jubilation set my face,
As the ecstasy left its trace.'

Now THAT is a joyful muse
who could leave such a smile.
Your muse compliments you well.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
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10 posted 03-08-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne


Another escape into this gifted poet's imagination, lovely!

Corinne
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11 posted 03-08-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ah, Seymour, this is so beautiful!  

Denise
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12 posted 03-09-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Your muse may be fragile, but she is generous... and we all benefit from your marvelous poems. *G* Wonderful, Seymour!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 03-09-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge, You say the nicest things. *L*

Corinne, Beautiful comment, thank you. *L*

Denise, Thank you sweet for the read and comment. *L*

Suthern, I thank you for the warm wonderful. *L*
Severn
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14 posted 03-10-2000 06:29 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh Sy - you know I have just run out of things to say about how I feel about your poetry...(you are my favourite structured verse poet - you and Lizzy both - you know that right?) so I just have to say...

wow.

Will that suffice?

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
 
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