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A muse of joy
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A muse of joy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A muse of joy Whispers floated across the room, Silhouettes danced the wall in loom. And music filled the in between As colors crowned the perfect scene. Echoes wondered into the street, The sun was down and in retreat. I wondered through the needles eye, Underneath a consummate sky. The birds flew in a southward trend, And disappeared around the bend. The ambience was sweet in smells, That rode and held the evening bells. And I was checked in magics glare, Gone, yet held in an awesome stare. Invented by a ponders bliss, Thrust by thoughts of a stolen kiss. The kiss and bliss were fancies find. Imagined in my censored mind. And jubilation set my face, As the ecstasy left its trace. It was a weavers wile of joy, A fragile muse, a lovers ploy. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Wow, this is excellent, you created quite the scene, I enjoyed very much. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your muse your bliss your stollen kiss in poem so sweet and not remiss Lovely! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed very much. Nicely done. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Brilliant. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI, Seymour Tabin Very, Very Wonderful...... Thank you, Cerenity |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~this flowed so beautifully! Loved it!  -SEA |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A "weavers wile of joy" indeed Need only to water its magic seed, And breathe as finely fragrant hue Colours the mind with fantasy's dew. Seymour, your poem coloured my mind. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nurse, Thank you for the WOW. Martie, A sweet comment, thank you *L* Mike, Glad you enjoyed. Eagle, Very nice comment, thank you. Cerenity, Hi thank you for the read and comment. Sea, Beautiful comment, thank you. Claire, A wonderful comment, I thank you much *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And jubilation set my face, As the ecstasy left its trace.' Now THAT is a joyful muse who could leave such a smile. Your muse compliments you well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Another escape into this gifted poet's imagination, lovely! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, Seymour, this is so beautiful! Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your muse may be fragile, but she is generous... and we all benefit from your marvelous poems. *G* Wonderful, Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You say the nicest things. *L* Corinne, Beautiful comment, thank you. *L* Denise, Thank you sweet for the read and comment. *L* Suthern, I thank you for the warm wonderful. *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Sy - you know I have just run out of things to say about how I feel about your poetry...(you are my favourite structured verse poet - you and Lizzy both - you know that right?) so I just have to say... wow. Will that suffice? K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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