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SEA
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0 posted 2000-03-08 12:33 PM



Do you have a magic potion,
Did you cast a magic spell?
Through a Wizard's eyes, you see me
~You know me so well~

Swirling moonbeams around me
As careless as a breeze
To my tired soul,
You brought a gentle ease

You healed my aching heart
with the touch of your hand,
How is it so easy
for you to understand?

Granted wishes,
with a soft caress
Merlin's magic~
You must surely posses.
-SEA-


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1 posted 2000-03-08 12:36 PM


Abbra-cadabbra, I must confess,
I really am quite "possessed"
I have a recipe, for a magic potion,
Would love to use it on you if ya had the notion,

So how about it...you and me....
I'd love to be diving into the beautiful Sea!

Hi ya sweetie...hope you're doing well...I've missed all of ya.....take care hon.....

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2 posted 2000-03-08 12:39 PM


Oh Toe~ I have missed you!! Thanks for the wonderful reply. You gave a huge smile!  -SEA
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3 posted 2000-03-08 03:27 PM


This is romantic and refreshing.   Yes there is healing when someone accepts us and admires us just as we are.   James
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4 posted 2000-03-08 04:52 PM


James~ thank you, I'm glad you liked this. -SEA
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5 posted 2000-03-08 05:06 PM


Aaahhh....it's been a long time since I've felt that magic, but I do know where you're coming from!  There's nothing like it in the world, and once you've tasted it, you won't settle for less!  LOL     Love is magic indeed....and if it's not, it's not love.  Beautiful poem madam.      (big sigh....)  
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6 posted 2000-03-08 05:16 PM


I think that you have found that love IS magic--Very lovely poem Sea.
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7 posted 2000-03-08 05:28 PM


What an amazing poem!!!  The feeling you left me with is a spell all it's own.  Thank you for sharing your gift of touching the hearts around you.
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pFF~ thanks... my husband is my Magician! And no, I could never settle for less!

Martie~ yes,Love is magic!

Butterflies~thank you, I'm glad you liked this!
-SEA

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9 posted 2000-03-08 05:57 PM


SEA...I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!
very creative using the magic and spells to CONJURE up the feelings of a perfect love.
perfect poetry take care, jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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10 posted 2000-03-08 06:34 PM


When in love sometimes it feel like magic.....or like being under a spell of love that draws you to the one you love.  Done well to express that feeling  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


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11 posted 2000-03-08 07:16 PM


SEA~
You performed a little 'magic' yourself
with this one.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-03-08 07:28 PM


Lovely, SEA!

Corinne

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Janet~ you are so sweet, thank you!  

First Knight~ thanks!

Marge~ thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!

Corinne~((blushing)) thank you!
-SEA

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14 posted 2000-03-09 09:22 AM


Mystifying feeling love is - you've captured the "magic" well.  Soft, delicate, and beautiful.


Michael

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15 posted 2000-03-09 09:31 AM


Michael~ I just popped in here a few minutes ago, and I found your kind reply. Wow, that makes me feel so good. Thank you. -SEA
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16 posted 2000-03-09 11:08 AM


I love this, SEA... it's beautiful!!!

And Toe... I love your reply too, oh fickle one! *G*

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17 posted 2000-03-09 03:26 PM


SEA,this is so beautiful so touching and filled with magic... loved these 4 lines ......
Swirling moonbeams around me
As careless as a breeze
To my tired soul,
You brought a gentle ease

Beautiful!!  



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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