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Local Rebel
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0 posted 03-08-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Local Rebel

How can I be unfaithful?
You inspired all my best
What remains for another?


 Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran
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Corazon
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1 posted 03-08-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow, how can 3 lines say so much?
Toerag
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Ala bam a


2 posted 03-08-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

And the last line should read:

"Just overlook all the rest".....Hi ya Hawk!
Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!


3 posted 03-08-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Excellent!
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow Rebel...you have spoke volumes in a matter of 14 well written and well put words. Wonderfully said, there's no shame in brevity when it results in a creation such as this  
Local Rebel
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5 posted 03-08-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Thanks all!! appreciate the comments truly...

Buzz... if only!!!
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Rebel, very powerful message.... I love the title, somehow I knew it was haiku.

Parker
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with you


7 posted 03-08-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

LR~you took the words right outta my heart!Excellent!   -SEA
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 03-08-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Clever 'aiku~ing...

~ Claire
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9 posted 03-08-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

What remains?   Hummm.....well, probably at least nothing above the waist?  Er....I didn't say that, did I ??  Never mind!!  Someone delete me or something....ROFL  Sorry sir...didn't mean to make *light* of your 3 little lines...      Sweet, and so so short...hehe
Local Rebel
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10 posted 03-08-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

I'm sorry pFF... didn't get the joke... nothing ABOVE the waist??? you say??? lol....

make as light as you wish!! always...  
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