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A Journey of Souls

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


0 posted 03-08-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EagleOne

For Roniece.....


We travel different paths you and I
Yet we have found each other
Was it chance or destiny?

You have touched my soul like no other
And brought the sunlight into my life
That light that is your love

You've taught me to look beyond the pain
To break the chains that restrain me
You give me freedom from myself

Though we may never meet
You see me, you know me
You have known me forever

Though the paths we take may differ
We shall journey on as one
I shall always be with you

It is enough that I know, I love you




[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 03-10-2000).]
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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 03-08-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Bingo!
I've a friend like this. I love her with all my heart, and even when we don't see each other for a couple of years, when we get back together, it's like we were never apart! Awesome!
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 03-08-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent!! I hope you shared this one with your friend  
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 03-08-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I would title this "Our Journey".  It would seem to fit the flow of the poem.
Nice piece.
Enola
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4 posted 03-08-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Yes - show it to your friend!  Some people come and go, but friends like that are forever.  Wonderful poem, love it.  As long as you keep writing like this, I will keep replying.  Welcome to the family.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever


5 posted 03-08-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

We seem to have a lot in common, and not just in our usernames..
EagleOne
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6 posted 03-08-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Thankyou one and all for your comments, they are much appreciated. Yes I'm sure that I will share it with my friend.

Enola...Yes! she is a very special person, a rare treasure.
I have never considered myself a poet and doubt I ever will. I just try to exprees my feelings with honesty. I guess my aim is to be able to convey those feelings.
I hope not to disappoint with my future postings...
MyPenNameIsSam
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7 posted 03-08-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

I love those 2 lines... "You've taught me to look beyond the pain, To break the chains that restrain me".  Beautiful poem and something that I think most of us can relate to or at some point in our life will be able to relate to..."You have known me forever".  I loved it!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 03-08-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

You have brought tears to my eyes....I understand so completely...although I ache for more I find peace in knowing that my heart has found a place to call home.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 03-08-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Eddie, another amazing piece darling xx
I am so pleased you took my advice and posted some poetry here in Passions -everyone one can now tell you how talented a poet you are.... Your star is shining my friend  
Keep Smiling        Roniece xx     
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10 posted 03-08-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

EagleOne~
Friendships are so important
to all of us and you wove this
one well.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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How lucky you are!!!
EagleOne
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12 posted 03-08-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Roniece...I am glad you convinced me to post to netpoets, I am amazed and flattered at the response to my postings. If my star shines bright it is because it bathes in the light of your friendship.

Butterflies...I understand the ache you feel all too well, there is comfort in friendship.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 03-09-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Eddie - thank you! that was a lovely compliment - our friendship will indeed last for a long time xx      Roniece    
A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 03-09-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I know this all to well, Welcome to passions!I liked you poem!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Michael
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15 posted 03-09-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, what a beautiful poem.  

"It is enough that I know you"

Those words clasp around my heart.  What feeling.  


Michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-09-2000).]
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 03-09-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Eddie - thank you xx
My heart and soul are warmed with the knowledge that you penned those words for me - what a wonderful friend I have in you xx
you are the real treasure my friend xx
Roniece
Butterflies_dont_cry
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17 posted 03-09-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I stopped back in to re-read the words that touched my heart so deeply before. I just wanted to let you know that I think the title you have chosen is perfect for it.
Meadowmuse
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18 posted 03-09-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"You've taught me to look beyond the pain
To break the chains that restrain me
You give me freedom from myself"

You mayn't consider yourself a poet, but this, my friend, is poetry. Do keep writing.  

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