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A Journey of Souls |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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For Roniece..... We travel different paths you and I Yet we have found each other Was it chance or destiny? You have touched my soul like no other And brought the sunlight into my life That light that is your love You've taught me to look beyond the pain To break the chains that restrain me You give me freedom from myself Though we may never meet You see me, you know me You have known me forever Though the paths we take may differ We shall journey on as one I shall always be with you It is enough that I know, I love you [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 03-10-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Bingo! I've a friend like this. I love her with all my heart, and even when we don't see each other for a couple of years, when we get back together, it's like we were never apart! Awesome! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!! I hope you shared this one with your friend  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I would title this "Our Journey". It would seem to fit the flow of the poem. Nice piece. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Yes - show it to your friend! Some people come and go, but friends like that are forever. Wonderful poem, love it. As long as you keep writing like this, I will keep replying. Welcome to the family. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
We seem to have a lot in common, and not just in our usernames.. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thankyou one and all for your comments, they are much appreciated. Yes I'm sure that I will share it with my friend. Enola...Yes! she is a very special person, a rare treasure. I have never considered myself a poet and doubt I ever will. I just try to exprees my feelings with honesty. I guess my aim is to be able to convey those feelings. I hope not to disappoint with my future postings... |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
I love those 2 lines... "You've taught me to look beyond the pain, To break the chains that restrain me". Beautiful poem and something that I think most of us can relate to or at some point in our life will be able to relate to..."You have known me forever". I loved it! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You have brought tears to my eyes....I understand so completely...although I ache for more I find peace in knowing that my heart has found a place to call home. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie, another amazing piece darling xx I am so pleased you took my advice and posted some poetry here in Passions -everyone one can now tell you how talented a poet you are.... Your star is shining my friend  Keep Smiling Roniece xx |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Friendships are so important to all of us and you wove this one well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
How lucky you are!!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Roniece...I am glad you convinced me to post to netpoets, I am amazed and flattered at the response to my postings. If my star shines bright it is because it bathes in the light of your friendship. Butterflies...I understand the ache you feel all too well, there is comfort in friendship. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie - thank you! that was a lovely compliment - our friendship will indeed last for a long time xx Roniece |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I know this all to well, Welcome to passions!I liked you poem! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, what a beautiful poem. "It is enough that I know you" Those words clasp around my heart. What feeling. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-09-2000).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie - thank you xx My heart and soul are warmed with the knowledge that you penned those words for me - what a wonderful friend I have in you xx you are the real treasure my friend xx Roniece |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I stopped back in to re-read the words that touched my heart so deeply before. I just wanted to let you know that I think the title you have chosen is perfect for it. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"You've taught me to look beyond the pain To break the chains that restrain me You give me freedom from myself" You mayn't consider yourself a poet, but this, my friend, is poetry. Do keep writing. |
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