Thankyou one and all for your comments, they are much appreciated. Yes I'm sure that I will share it with my friend.
Enola...Yes! she is a very special person, a rare treasure. I have never considered myself a poet and doubt I ever will. I just try to exprees my feelings with honesty. I guess my aim is to be able to convey those feelings. I hope not to disappoint with my future postings...
I love those 2 lines... "You've taught me to look beyond the pain, To break the chains that restrain me". Beautiful poem and something that I think most of us can relate to or at some point in our life will be able to relate to..."You have known me forever". I loved it!
Eddie, another amazing piece darling xx I am so pleased you took my advice and posted some poetry here in Passions -everyone one can now tell you how talented a poet you are.... Your star is shining my friend Keep Smiling Roniece xx
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