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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-08-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Your name rolls easily off my tongue,
Into the air,
My hands seem shaky as if grabbing
Something that isnít there
What is this that I feel?
An opinion that has never been modified
A certain dose of patience
Never before known, yet always denied
Itís the subject of time
That fills my mind
Itís the questioning of time
That leaves us behind

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!


1 posted 03-08-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I'm glad I took the time to read your poem for I like it very much. Thanks for sharing it here.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-08-2000).]
Christopher
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2 posted 03-08-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Me too! I like the take on this!
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 03-08-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I see you sit and ponder alot, 'eh?  That's good...
Very interesting insight into the thing that gets us all....TIME.  Not enough of it for sure...I am a dreamer, so it's my worst enemy I fear.  LOL     I spend so much time thinking through what I'm going to do, I hardly even get started on a darn thing!  hehehe  Geat poem!
Janet Marie
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4 posted 03-08-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

HOW did I miss this one earlier???
wow... all that "flirting" must have distracted me from my stalking...see what you've started... LOL
this one is shows your reflective moments their best... I love the last lines...
stalking you always..jm



 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 03-08-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

A very powerful message. You have a gift and shared it well.  Thank you!
Sven
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6 posted 03-08-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent my friend. . . "Time" does lots of things. . . I think that you have found the one thing that we all overlook. . .

Wonderful words. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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