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Dead Man Walking

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Enola
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0 posted 03-08-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Enola

Dead Man Walking

Open your eyes to her graciousness,
For all her time she has made yours,
Please don't leave her stranded again,
Else there will be more closed doors.

Can't you see what you are missing?
Or are you actually blind?
Soon her meter will expire,
This I hope you'll never find.

I can't bear to see this suffering,
In the wake of one lame heart.
For god's sake make her better,
Or our paths, they are going to part.

Is it something we have done,
That is the source of this tourment?
Your ignorance only helps me with,
This rotting picture of you I paint.


 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
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infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 02-14-2000
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1 posted 03-08-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

is this about who i think it is about ? . if it is , i agree . ill speak to you later .
love you
mike
mete out
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since 02-16-2000
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2 posted 03-08-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Enola,
Wow...this seems kind of different from your last postings somehow...it seems more anger-fuelled.
I hope that whoever this poem is aimed at takes notice soon...
Another fantastic posting.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
angelswing
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since 02-10-2000
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3 posted 03-15-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Cool, I have now replied to it, so you can stop naging me, and none of us will walk away from you debs, we are all here to support you and help you to carry your problems when they overflow, you can't keep it all bottled up, talk to us whenever you want, you may even feel better afterwards, great poem it has depth and strength far surpasing my expectations, I think it's your best yet .
L.Of.L Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Enola
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4 posted 03-15-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

mete out - thank you yet again, your on going support is fantastic.  Unfortunatly,the person /people that this is about, are never going to understand, which is why I'm so angry about it.
infinat3 sadn3ss - it is about who you think it is.
angelswing - me, nag you?  Never.  Coming from you, that last comment means a lot. Thanks.


 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
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