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Resting my soul
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Resting my soul |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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The tranquility of the moment Is transporting me in another time Series of hocus bogus pocus Relationships that I cannot consume Fully to the maximum security Desire attires my face To unlock the truth About your feelings For me Whore of the mind Approaching the end of my life On earth blowing her scent My way to be buried Under Her blanket of dirt I curse the day of my conception Crumbs for the birds Attacking my legs So I won't walk the street at night Looking for love In clothing so pretty Shining my sign Come on in You are welcome to love me At no charge for the fun Of enjoying life so freely That no gold can buy Love real love From the bottomless pits Of hell burning for you and me Eternel feeling of emptiness The tranquility of the moment Carrying me to sea Questioning where I belong In this world of seizures Causing my children to jerk Their little body so innocent So much pain for them to endure God were are you? monique |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, where do I begin? There is so much emotion pouring from this, I don't know what to mention first? Fabulous style you have, you have a way of painting vivid pictures of expression in the reader's mind! You don't see that too often, unfortunately. I loved several parts of this, how you used descriptive, even painful words to paint your images....I'm in awe. "Buried under her blanket of dirt..." Wow.....I like that...only one of my favorite parts! Great stuff!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A portrait of emotional turmoil, monique, (and I should know, lol!) More of this, please, as I enjoyed it very much. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Monique this is interesting to read. I hope you find some rest for your soul. James |
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