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Resting my soul

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monique
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since 02-03-2000
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Louisiana


0 posted 03-08-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique

The tranquility of the moment
Is transporting me in another time
Series of hocus bogus pocus
Relationships that I cannot consume
Fully to the maximum security

Desire attires my face
To unlock the truth
About your feelings
For me
Whore of the mind

Approaching the end of my life
On earth blowing her scent
My way to be buried
Under
Her blanket of dirt

I curse the day of my conception
Crumbs for the birds
Attacking my legs
So I won't walk the street at night
Looking for love
In clothing so pretty
Shining my sign
Come on in

You are welcome to love me
At no charge for the fun
Of enjoying life so freely
That no gold can buy
Love real love
From the bottomless pits
Of hell burning for you and me
Eternel feeling of emptiness

The tranquility of the moment
Carrying me to sea
Questioning where I belong
In this world of seizures
Causing my children to jerk
Their little body so innocent
So much pain for them to endure
God were are you?

monique


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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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1 posted 03-08-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, where do I begin?  There is so much emotion pouring from this, I don't know what to mention first?  Fabulous style you have, you have a way of painting vivid pictures of expression in the reader's mind!  You don't see that too often, unfortunately.  I loved several parts of this, how you used descriptive, even painful words to paint your images....I'm in awe.  
"Buried under her blanket of dirt..."  Wow.....I like that...only one of my favorite parts!  Great stuff!  
serenity blaze
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2 posted 03-08-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

A portrait of emotional turmoil, monique,
(and I should know, lol!)  More of this, please, as I enjoyed it very much.
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 03-09-2000 05:02 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Monique this is interesting to read.   I hope you find some rest for your soul.  James
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