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First__Knight
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Apart
~First Knight~

My phone rang out today,
and it was everyone but you.
My stomach fell each time
as I am feeling blue.

My pager beeped today,
and I wished it had been you.
It was only the low battery,
and beeped upon this cue.

A lady looked at me today,
with a smile upon her face.
If only you would look at me,
and touch me with your grace.

Time passed so slow today,
with each hour like a day.
Alone I sit and wait for you,
crying along the way.

A pain felt in my chest today,
a breaking of my heart.
Nothing can fix the way I feel,
as long as we're apart.


 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

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Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 03-08-2000 01:03 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

Sad nice poem...

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-08-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sorry to read you're still blue first knight.
Just remember she is only following her heart and if her heart wants to take her somewhere else that is her destiny.  Its only good when two hearts that feel the same come together.  Believe me...I've been thru this.   Your poetry whether a happy theme or a sad theme is shining as usual.   Take care.   James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


3 posted 03-08-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This is sad Knight, cheer up...there are lots of juliets in their castles,love will find you when you least expect it!  
Enjoyed the poem!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


First__Knight
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4 posted 03-08-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Rosalind

Still trying to shake it off Jim.

Thank you Romantic Heart.  
tracie66
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5 posted 03-08-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This is a very touching poem first-knight but I'm sorry I have to agree with James. The two hearts have to be beating as one my friend and if they aren't then there's always trouble   LoL and a HUG from me xxx


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Marge Tindal
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6 posted 03-08-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David, my friend~

While this may be sad,
I find your heart telling it
like you feel it.

Love often beats in the heart of only one
waiting for the right heart to pick up
the beat.  When it comes again,
and it will, you will know.

'My phone rang out today,
and it was everyone but you.'

I really like this.
~*Marge*~


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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


7 posted 03-08-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Sigh... unrequited love. Been there, done that, don't envy you. Well written to wring out emotions and tears.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 03-08-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This poem captured the pain of waiting for love to be returned and time does stand still when that is what we are waiting for doesn't it.  This is magnificent.
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 03-08-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David...although this poem was very sad, I found it inspiring...as you will see from my post "Everything But You" It's hard to miss someone you care so much about, but I know the feeling well  
First__Knight
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10 posted 03-08-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

I agree Tracie.
Marge you always have the nicest things to say to me  

THank you Chris and butterflies,

Hoot....Believe me I know we are sharing the same feelings after reading  your work done from mine  
jascanvey
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11 posted 03-09-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

So sad a post, a place where so many of us have been. ((Hugs)) Keep smiling my friend, someday someone special will smile back..

 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.
First__Knight
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12 posted 03-09-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Jascanvey

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Marilyn
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13 posted 03-09-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Not sure how to respond to this one, knowing what I know. Sometimes love just isn't enough and words are just that until they are stood behind. Well written piece David.  
First__Knight
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14 posted 03-10-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Marilyn
Diana B
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15 posted 03-10-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Diana B   Email Diana B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Diana B

it shouldnt be this way...especially with spring blossoming just around the corner...and perhaps with that a love true for you...
First__Knight
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16 posted 03-10-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Diana.  I know it should not be
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