My goodness...I'll have to agree with Balladeer on this one. What can I say that hasn't already been said?? (seems I say that a great deal when it comes to your poetry, m'friend...could it be that I'm always late in reading? lol) I can say that when I read this, you were speaking for me. You may have written your pain, however detached, but you have written my past(perhaps some of my now, as well) with perfect clarity. Excellent work, as always guy!
May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.