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A Night With You

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just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN


0 posted 03-07-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

It's beautiful out here
as I lay on the beach.
I lay not on the sand
but on a red satin sheet.
The sound of the waves
crashing on the shore.
As I look to the stars thinking
could I ask for more?
You wrap your right arm
around my waist.
As I take in the warmth
of your loving embrace.
You pull me close
and i lightly kiss your chest.
Out of all the nights i've lived
tonight's the best.
The stars are bright.
The sky is blue.
Slowly I begin
making love to you.
After we're done
and the love making is through.
I lay there cuddled
close to you.

(long pause)

As I hold my pillow tight
the alarm clock rings
and i have to open my eyes
knowing all the pain it brings.
It was only a dream.
The beach, we were never there.
That perfect night together
was a night never shared.
© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
RufffRyder
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since 02-25-2000
Posts 191
<------Over There------>


1 posted 03-07-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

WOW!!!
Your a kick in the butt.
The first part of this was Great,but then you put a frown in my heart.
Anyway thank you for the read Lil Missy  
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 03-08-2000 01:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Just a dream...just a dream
all my plans and all my schemes.
This was enchanting my dear...
and full of magic til that darn pillow appeared.

Lovely writing...I love red satin sheets, red dresses, red lip stick....enjoyed this very much.  James

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 03-08-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I really enjoyed this one. Reminds me of a piece of erotic prose I wrote called Your Hands
PoeticKnight
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since 01-20-2000
Posts 1151
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4 posted 03-08-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

I always like a wicked twist to a poem, and you succeeded much. I like this one.
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with you


5 posted 03-08-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Just_Another_Fe~ I have a couple poems like this......I can relate very well. Thia is a GREAT poem! -SEA
 
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