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Sirens Sky

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Venusfly
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0 posted 03-07-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Venusfly   Email Venusfly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Venusfly

An orange glow lingering on the horizon
Separating snow-covered lands from the sky
Entangled wildly are clouds with rays of light
Strikingly beautiful yet detrimentally final
Ending another cycle of precious life

Temperatures falling and silence setting in
The distant silhouette of our planet
Slowly vanishing out of sight
The night collapsing into the light of the sun
Soon to be crowned by a crescent moon

It is dark now where the chills creep
Adopting to the isolation which surrounds
Blackness offset by emerging scattered stars
Forming familiar patterns illuminating the sky
Long believed to guide lost souls on their path

Imitating the Sirens of past legends
Enchanting sailors of the seven seas
Luring spirits starving for affection
To be devoured on rocky coasts and reefs
Miserable fortunes by way of followed dreams

Dreams that awake from within
The shooting star across a silent night
Fantastic cravings following an ecstatic hunger
For another like sunset to be shared
With the heart of this significant other

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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 03-07-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Venusfly,

This is so beautiful and romantic you write wonderfully thank you for sharing this with me.

Wecome to Passions, hope to see more of your work.

Cerenity
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-09-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Also enjoyed reading this.  Flows so well!
smoothe and tender.
Welcome to Passions.
Corinne
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3 posted 03-09-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Quite mystical!

Corinne
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4 posted 03-10-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I loved the last 2 stanzas - they spoke the loudest to me....beautiful this is.  "Enchanting sailors of the seven seas....luring spirits..."   What fabulous words and phrases you use!  I love it.    
StarrGazer
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5 posted 03-10-2000 02:58 PM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

very beautiful
...wow this place is filled with stars today i love it !!

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


 
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