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Ride With Me (Dedicated To Elizabeth)
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Ride With Me (Dedicated To Elizabeth) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Ride With Me Ride with me if you dare See what I see. Ride on a tail of a slippery wind, Sliding in and out, to and Fro. Come sail through a valley, Skim a roof top see men toil, with no end in sight. Keep riding with me see what I see. Ride with me were man has stopped the changing of the land, were he has not yet Set foot. Ride with me you will See. Race by the birds with places to go, see the fawn with no fear. See mother nature free of mans mark upon the land. Take the chance see what I see. Follow a steam into a lake float across the water, feel its coolness smell the freshness. Do you now see what I see. See mother nature at her best feel the freeness of your spirit. Now wake up, you are back in your make believe happy little existence. Want to take another ride? This poem is dedicated to Elizabeth for helping me, also that through her poetry she has shown the world so much love. Cerenity |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, It worked, I thank you so much, and this is a new poem just for you. Writers block is gone thanks again, Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cerenity...I think she'll love it  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cerenity: this is beautiful... *raising hands, jumping up and down frantically* I wanna go...please...come on...take me?  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know this isn't for me, but I still like it! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hi Cerenity! Thanks for the wonderful ride! My last read before going on a week long trip and I'm so glad I happened on it. You are a very sweet poet. And it is a wonderful poem. Thank you, dear. Liz Hi Elizabeth, I'll share it with you. liz |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
Your poem gave me goosebumps, Cerenity. It was beautiful and so true. You did a wonderful job of showing us the beauty of nature and then reminding us - like a smack in the face - that we aren't treating nature as we should and we don't value it as much as we like to pretend we do...atleast we don't pay attention to how much we truly value it... Very nice. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sam, Its so fun and needed to be reminded of who, were, and how we all servive this every day mess that we live in and that with out mother nature at her best we would not be here. Hi hootie, thank you I think she did (smilling I am ) Hi Passing shadows, Would'nt it be so much fun if we could realley fly. Hi Elizabeth, Im glad you liked it and I know Liz ment what she said She is the sweetest lady. Thank you everybody, Cerenity |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hi Cerenity, nice to meet you. Hi Elizabeth, thanks for sharing the poem with me! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Cerenity! Very lovely! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, How are you sweetie, thanks for the wonderful words. I have been fighting the old writers block for a while, but for some reason it seems to of vanished so here I am. Talk to you soon, Cerenity |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
Your words are deep and I can feel the emotion through your them... |
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