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Ride With Me (Dedicated To Elizabeth)

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Cerenity
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Ride With Me


Ride with me if you dare
See what I see. Ride on a
tail of a slippery wind,
Sliding in and out, to and
Fro.

Come sail through a valley,
Skim a roof top see men toil,
with no end in sight. Keep
riding with me see what I see.

Ride with me were man has
stopped the changing of the
land, were he has not yet
Set foot. Ride with me you will
See.

Race by the birds with places
to go, see the fawn with no fear.
See mother nature free of mans
mark upon the land. Take the
chance see what I see.

Follow a steam into a lake float
across the water, feel its coolness
smell the freshness. Do you now
see what I see.

See mother nature at her best
feel the freeness of your spirit.
Now wake up, you are back in
your make believe happy little
existence.

Want to take another ride?


This poem is dedicated to Elizabeth for helping me, also that through her poetry she has shown the world so much love.

Cerenity
© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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1 posted 03-07-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Liz,

It worked, I thank you so much, and this is a new poem just for you. Writers block is gone thanks again,

Cerenity
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Cerenity...I think she'll love it  
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cerenity: this is beautiful...

*raising hands, jumping up and down frantically* I wanna go...please...come on...take me?  
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4 posted 03-07-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I know this isn't for me, but I still like it!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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5 posted 03-08-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hi Cerenity! Thanks for the wonderful ride! My last read before going on a week long trip and I'm so glad I happened on it. You are a very sweet poet. And it is a wonderful poem. Thank you, dear.
Liz

Hi Elizabeth, I'll share it with you.
liz
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Your poem gave me goosebumps, Cerenity.  It was beautiful and so true.  You did a wonderful job of showing us the beauty of nature and then reminding us - like a smack in the face - that we aren't treating nature as we should and we don't value it as much as we like to pretend we do...atleast we don't pay attention to how much we truly value it...  Very nice.
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Hi Sam,

Its so fun and needed to be reminded of who, were, and how we all servive this every day mess that we live in and that with out mother nature at her best we would not be here.

Hi hootie, thank you I think she did (smilling I am )

Hi Passing shadows, Would'nt it be so much fun if we could realley fly.

Hi Elizabeth,
Im glad you liked it and I know Liz ment what she said She is the sweetest lady.


Thank you everybody,

Cerenity
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8 posted 03-08-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Hi Cerenity, nice to meet you.

Hi Elizabeth, thanks for sharing the poem with me!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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This is beautiful, Cerenity! Very lovely!

Denise
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10 posted 03-09-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Denise,

How are you sweetie, thanks for the wonderful words. I have been fighting the old writers block for a while, but for some reason it seems to of vanished so here I am.


Talk to you soon,
Cerenity
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11 posted 03-09-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for jazzgal   Email jazzgal   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jazzgal

Your words are deep and I can feel the emotion through your them...  
 
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