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Sighs of Torment

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-07-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Sighs of
Torment


Rain

drops
softly upon
my window sill

Tears

fall
silently upon
my aching heart

Wind

blows
noisily
swirling round
swaying trees

Sighs

whisper
desperately
within this
tormented soul

Run

from
me, leave
this breaking
heart

Alone

Let
Me be
Set me free...

Please

Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-07-2000).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-07-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Are you ok, Maree? This is a poem filled with pain! It's very good, but I'm worried!
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2 posted 03-07-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
Wow!

This is hauntingly lovely.
Such depths of emotion.
The words alone would have been enough ...
but the formatting adds tremendously
to the overall 'feel' of it.

This one calls my name,
over and over again.
That doesn't happen often.
~*Marge*~




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-07-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is breath taking and so filled with pain and sorrow.  I am so moved by the picture that you painted with your words. Your gift is amazing.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-07-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very well written and formatted, but oh so sad

((((((HUGS))))))
Dark Angel
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5 posted 03-08-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon, I am fine honey, thank you.   Sorry to worry you.  
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Wow Marge, thank you, not sure If I'm deserving of such a lovely compliment. Glad you liked it, the format was experimental.
Thanks again.  
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B_D_C, Thank you for your lovely reply, and your lovely copmliment, although I wouldn't say It's amazing hehe. thank.
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Ruth honey, thanks sweetie.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


6 posted 03-08-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Haunting indeed. Tears torn from the soul of your pen. Well done.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 03-08-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you for your lovely reply Christopher.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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8 posted 03-08-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

DA this is extrememly well done! So very sad it just rips your heart out! EXCELLENT work my friend!!!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
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9 posted 03-08-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent, DA! I could feel the anguish in this! Well done!

Denise
Dark Angel
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10 posted 03-10-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Rebecca Angel, thanks Sweetheart.  
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Denise, thank you for your lovely reply.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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11 posted 03-10-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Simply lovely.

The wisp of sadness is so palatable...wow...Maree, you have done very well.

Excellent layout too...and putting 'alone' by itself really shouts it out.

Hugs, K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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Between a laugh and a tear...


12 posted 03-10-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Reading your work one can't help but feel the emotion, indeed you paint a vivid picture.
Marilyn
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13 posted 03-10-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Wow. This was wonderful. An experimental form but it suits you. Well written my friend.  
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