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Sighs of Torment
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Sighs of Torment |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Sighs of < !signature-->Torment Rain drops softly upon my window sill Tears fall silently upon my aching heart Wind blows noisily swirling round swaying trees Sighs whisper desperately within this tormented soul Run from me, leave this breaking heart Alone Let Me be Set me free... Please Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-07-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Are you ok, Maree? This is a poem filled with pain! It's very good, but I'm worried! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Wow! This is hauntingly lovely. Such depths of emotion. The words alone would have been enough ... but the formatting adds tremendously to the overall 'feel' of it. This one calls my name, over and over again. That doesn't happen often. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is breath taking and so filled with pain and sorrow. I am so moved by the picture that you painted with your words. Your gift is amazing. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well written and formatted, but oh so sad  ((((((HUGS)))))) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, I am fine honey, thank you.  Sorry to worry you. --------------------- Wow Marge, thank you, not sure If I'm deserving of such a lovely compliment. Glad you liked it, the format was experimental. Thanks again. --------------------- B_D_C, Thank you for your lovely reply, and your lovely copmliment, although I wouldn't say It's amazing hehe. thank. --------------------- Ruth honey, thanks sweetie. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Haunting indeed. Tears torn from the soul of your pen. Well done. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you for your lovely reply Christopher. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this is extrememly well done! So very sad it just rips your heart out! EXCELLENT work my friend!!! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, DA! I could feel the anguish in this! Well done! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rebecca Angel, thanks Sweetheart. --------------------- Denise, thank you for your lovely reply. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simply lovely. The wisp of sadness is so palatable...wow...Maree, you have done very well. Excellent layout too...and putting 'alone' by itself really shouts it out. Hugs, K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Reading your work one can't help but feel the emotion, indeed you paint a vivid picture. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wow. This was wonderful. An experimental form but it suits you. Well written my friend. |
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