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I'll do anything/I'm sorry

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Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 03-07-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I hope y'll enjoy it.

I'm trying to
carry on life
without you
but, it's hard to do.
I can't and I won't accept
the fact that I'm not yours
because you was
my sweetheart and more.
Just the thought
of another man
holding and kissing you
makes me lose my cool.
Baby, I'm sorry
for cheating on you
because now I realize that no woman
could love me like you do.
And I'll do anything for you
because I deeply adore you.
I'm sorry for what I've done
because the pain
weighs one-hundred tons.
I beleve that it's not to late
for me to enter your gate.
If only there was something
that I could do
to reassure you
that I won't hurt you anymore
because I'm not the same man as before.
Can't you tell that I'm sorry?
Can't you tell by the sad look in my eyes
and I assure you that they tell no lies.
Please forgive me
and relieve me
from all this pain and grief.
because I am deeply sorry.


 Nathan
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JamesMichael
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Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


1 posted 03-07-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nicely written expression of your grief...I hope for the best for you Nate...keep trying.   James
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 03-07-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nate~
I sense the pain of regret in this.
When trust is breeched ... it's so difficult to convince someone of your sorrow, for they have a sorrow of their own.
Hope things work out for the best.
~*Marge*~



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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


3 posted 03-08-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Sometimes saying sorry isn't enough, YOUR ACTIONS along with words will show how sincere you are, only time can heal hurt and pain...I have been hurt by this and it has took years to get over, I have a hard time trusting others because of this pain and hurt that I didn't ask for but had to deal with it anyway! hope all goes well....

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 03-08-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Your pain is evident in this one. I hope that you are able to overcome the mistakes of your past to go on with your future.
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


5 posted 03-08-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I'm glad that everyone appreciated it because I wanted to put as much soul in it as I could. Thanks again for the comments.

 Nathan
Denise
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6 posted 03-08-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nate, this is fantastic! Packed with emotion!
Very very well done!

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla


7 posted 03-09-2000 11:52 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nate, There is nothing wrong with this style
Nice poem.
Nate Dogg
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Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


8 posted 03-12-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Seymore. I really needed to hear that.

 Nathan
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