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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 03-07-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Thoughts From You

We snuggled closely together
upon the glowing warmth
of the summer sand.
My eyes reading
and gathering
thoughts
from
you.

Your
crystal
heart beating
my favorite tune.
Your arms embracing
all of my hopes and dreams
as I dissolve into your tranquility
for only the short time that's allowed.
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 03-07-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Seems like wonderful moments..and you have posted a nice hour glass poem here.  James
Corazon
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2 posted 03-07-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is great....oh gosh...just love it...you can see the precious moments filtering away as you read....great poem!
Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 03-07-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Why ... Nurse C.,
A while ago you did your best to hide your warm and fuzzy , and now you parade it around like the the old "zap" machine's broke
and you've got nothing better to do !
Nurse Crachet
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4 posted 03-07-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

jmlee12345, Thank you, very much

Corazon, Thank you also, this one just formed itself amazingly


Oh, but Dr. Moose
I have lots better
to do
I just choose not to.

Need I remind you,
you released
this Nurse
from her pain
when it appeared
she was going insane.

This is the new revised version
ready to concur
the world
and all the men in it.
(ROTFLMAO)
I'm really not this arrogant
guess still just a little crazy.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-07-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 03-07-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

NurseC~
I like the format and the
grains of 'sand' drifting through it.
You are extremely gifted.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nurse Crachet
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6 posted 03-08-2000 08:29 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Marge, Thank you very much, this one amazed even me.
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow....this is really creative. An impressive piece of poetry  
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 03-08-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Grains of sand falling
Each in memory of love spent
within your cup
Filling your heart too the brim
and over
Drowning you in a sea of passion
that forever rains
like time
Martie
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9 posted 03-08-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh, how beautiful--to dissolve into your tranquility--lovely!
Nurse Crachet
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10 posted 03-08-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Your passion raining as time
twenty-four hours of bliss
being in heaven today.
Seven glorious days,
creating one week.

Weeks leading
through into months
souls passion unending
a calm river of foreverness
while sands of time trickle by.

Martie, thank you very much for reading and enjoying.




[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-08-2000).]
First__Knight
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11 posted 03-08-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

I was left with only wishing the hour glass was bigger.......but I am selfish that way.

Beautiful till the last grain of sand....

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

 
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