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True Love Of A Fair Maidens Heart

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 03-07-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

My love, for thee I await,
At the castle gates,

For thee to rescue my lonely heart,
From this sorrow, This pain that my heart beholds,

This cage has bound thy soul to death,
It has wounded thy heart deeply,

My prince, my knight,
Oh, how my soul weeps for thee,

I hunger, I thirst for thee,
Come rescue me from this darkness of doom,

Break thy chains to set thee free,
For love I hold within me,
Tis not love,

Love of will, of control,
Tis not love that binds me here,

I am no fools love,
For love does not command,
Love is not love which demands, deceives,
or destroys,

Love hath thou brought to thee,
Unto thy heart,

Behold this love,
This key to thy heart,

Rescue me thy sweet prince,
Set thy fair maidens' heart free,

This fortress holds me no more,
No castle walls, nor gates that bind,
Nor guards to capture me,

Tonight, my sweet love, My dear prince,
I will await for thee,

Through death, though pain,
Our love is destiny,

For the world shall crumble, The trees shall fall,
The earth covered by the sea,

I will endure all, a thousand times,
Just to hold you once,

For the smell of your flesh,
The taste of your lips,

To hear your heartbeat against mine,
To stare deep into your eyes of mystery,
All for gain , nothing at loss,

You have captured the love of this fair maidens heart,

It is with passion, with love,
That I call out to thee,

Come my sweet prince to rescue me,
For time is of the essence,
death shall come to thy heart,

If love does not embrace it,
My soul will be torn apart,

This, my love,
Is the love of your true maidens' heart.


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-07-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice poem.  I liked the way you structured this.  Makes it read so well.
Makes me want to come and rescue that lonely heart that waits at the castle gates.
Such gallantry it provokes.
Good work.
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 03-07-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You are such a beautiful and romantic lover.
My favorite one above all the others.   Very nice fair maiden.   love it.   James
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 03-07-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Danny: Your so kind with words, words that make me melt, Thank you for your sweet compliments...I am humbled sir Daniel!
You can rescue me anytime

James:I am blushing, but yet moved by your sweet words to my ear,I enjoyed the short little poem and the compliment of being called a fair maiden....very nice sir James!

The rescue of my lonely hearts plea,
can be rescued with gallant poetry...I love to read poems of this nature, written by others to inspire me....


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


First__Knight
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since 11-08-1999
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4 posted 03-08-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Nice to see your return Romantic Heart.  Romance seems to live in your words and no better I have seen.  Thank you for the sharing and insight

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 03-08-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thank you sir knight, romance is in my dreams,poetry comes from my dreams,
Your compliment is too kind, and the insight is what friends are for!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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