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Rainbow of Love

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mystery
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0 posted 03-07-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery


Gazing at the clear blue skies
In a daze by the vibrant sun
I shed tears of joy
Because I am happy to be with you
I have exposed my spectrum of love

When you see the color red
Don't think that I am embarrassed by you
Know that I am proud of your love
Red is for our intensely heated passion

You are beautiful like autumn leaves
With an attitude that reflects on me like the sun
Orange represents your warmth

Golden is your skin tone
My first prize possession
Sweeter than the taste of honey
Yellow will retain this memory

Green is for your youthful appearance
So vigorous and full of life
Many women envy me because I have you

Blue expresses the way that I feel
When you are not around me
Being my other half
I feel imcomplete without you

The deepest feeling inside of me
Is represented by Indigo
For I wish that you never let me go

In love with your regal ways
Who would not love a man of your stature
Purple reveals how imperial you are

This spectrum that I show you
Will never fade
It remains brilliant and true
My rainbow of love represents seven colors
And those seven colors represent you


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-07-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely colors in your rainbow!  
Honeybee
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Mystery:

What a beautiful use of seven colours to express your love. The first stanza drew me in and the second stanza was my favourite, maybe because red is my favourite colour.  You certainly do have a way with words.
Excellent poem, it was creative and flowed perfectly. This is the first poem that I have read by you, and I must say I am impressed. I look forward to reading more poetry by you.  I wonder why no one else has discovered your gem.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Mystery~

It's no mystery that I like this.
Such a myriad of colors.
A spectrum of vivid hues ...
splashed all over the canvas.
Lovely, just lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 03-08-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Very beautiful and expressive with detail! I like how you ended it
Now every time I see a rainbow I will think of your poem!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


mystery
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5 posted 03-08-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

I appreciate the compliments that I have received from all of you talented poets. I am glad that everyone enjoyed reading this piece. Thank You! and I look forward to reading your works as well. To Marge, I'll keep that in mind each time I write a new poem."THE PEN OF THE POET NEVER RUNS OUT OF INK, AS LONG AS WE BREATHE."
Dark Angel
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6 posted 03-09-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A beautiful way to express your love, the 7 colours of the rainbow. Beautiful.   looking forward to reading more of your works.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 03-09-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Well now - this is really interesting!  I like it I do!   So cool how you found something for every color!
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 03-09-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Um....one more thing....er....don't the rainbows come AFTER the rain?  Okay...just making sure, cause I'm in the middle of a freakin' toad strangler in my life, and I'm sure hoping for a rainbow like this once it's over - IF I survive!      Thanks for a bit of hope!  
 
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