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What I Long For.....

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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25 posted 03-08-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Hoot, Danny, Christopher and the much to kind...Mete (I'm still a lovely shade of red from your compliments...lol)

Thank you for your "welcome" it means so much coming from a writers with as much talent as I have seen you write with. I am shocked that anyone even read my poems let alone liked them and no I'm not being coy...that's not who I am.  We are our own hardest judge and never feel what we do is good enough so to hear your praise I feel very out of sorts and am working at writing replies without wondering if you are all reading a different poem that the one I wrote...lol From the bottom of my heart I thank each and everyone of you very Sincerely.

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26 posted 03-08-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Butterflies~ Welcome...I will always be honest with you. This is wonderful..I'm glad you shared it with us.I've only been gone a few days, now I'll have to seek out more from you!   -SEA
Dark Angel
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27 posted 03-08-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Butterflies... welcome to passions.     My replies/comments are always what I truly feel deep within me.  

This is a beautiful and heartfelt piece and touched me deeply. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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28 posted 03-08-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  When I first saw the title of this, I thought it was my poem! I wrote something similuar to the longing!  I can relate to this too! I think it's something many people yearn for, look for in life.  I sure hope you find that someone to fill that loneliness!!  I would like to post mine here for you too so you can see what I mean.

What I Long For...

I long for awesome sunsets
Someone to share them with
Romantic walks along the beach
A passionate tender kiss

I long for summer nights
To lay beneath the moon
Make love under twinklin stars
Or in the park at noon

I long for summer dances
In a field filled high with wheat
Or the coldness of a stream
Where we could hang our feet

Romantic dinners by candlelight
A loving word from you
A warm and steamy bath
With bubbles filled for two
1999 WhtDove

See we both long for someone to share things with. I enjoyed your poem immensely!
Denise
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29 posted 03-08-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a very beautiful, touching poem! Welcome to Passions!  

Denise
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


30 posted 10-13-2001 10:28 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Just me wandering around the archives again!  

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


31 posted 03-17-2002 08:14 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


I eventually get to all the "first posts" and find that I am always glad I did....
passing shadows
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32 posted 01-01-2003 01:09 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

that's what I want too...thanks for sharing
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33 posted 04-20-2004 04:41 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a beautiful piece
EagleOne
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34 posted 10-20-2009 01:35 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

This still brings tears to my eyes!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

 
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